[✗] [Pending] CowCatTheThird

[CowCatTheThird 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Cow_Cat_The_3rd

What timezone are you in?: mountain time zone

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: the no trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): none

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/164511-%E2%9C%97-cowcatthethird/#comment-1555209

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): no because it stops me

What is Roleplaying?: playing as a different character than yourself

What is Metagaming?: using knowledge that your character doesn't know

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: having your charter do something unrealistic

 

Character’s name: (Vulwin Sarkalyn)

Character’s sex: (male)

Character’s race: ( half snow elf half dark elf)

Character’s age: (100)

Biography  (i was on a hunting trip in the snowy mountains with my parents. Before they were killed by another hunting group. The group was made up of 5 humans. after They they killed my parents i ran before they could capture me. I hid in the forest for 3 hours waiting for a chance to kill them. when they were sleeping i set 3 of them on fire and shot the fourth in the left eye with my bow. to kill the 5th I challenged him to combat where he cut my face twice. In the end I staged him in the chest with my parents swords. My parents had  raised me with one of the highest level educations, a strong body and, combat skills. I had to sell my parents shop to survive.

(he comes from silver city)

Personality Traits: (arrogant, hate humans, dislikes cavern dwarfs)

Ambitions: (to have a store and castle)

Strengths/Talents: (combat, battle tactics, business,)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (his arrogance and quickness to anger)

Appearance: ( white winter coat and light brown skin ; 6’1’’?;  blue hair?; 2 on the face?)

Skin: same game skin but light brown skin

 

 

 

[LordCommander 163]

[LordCommander 163]

Sadly, my friend, your application has a few small issues that prevent your application from being accepted. Once said things are fixed, please send me a private message on the forums. 

 

1) Backstory: Your backstory is rather lacking, the whole parents were killed clique is rather overdone. Also, why was another group of hunters, decided to kill a family of snow elves? were they bandits or were they just really xenophobic? also the jarring transition from how you somehow killed a group of five people all by yourself to how you were raised. Also, I recommend actually adding the lore reference to your backstory, instead of just adding it at the end. Final note, Snow Elves don't usually come from the silver city to my knowledge. They live in the principality of Fenn.

 

2) Skin: Please link your actual minecraft skin, also being a half-snow elf and half-dark elf would probably not give you brown skin, more likely you would either have the skin color of either the pale Snow Elves or the hues of purple from your Dark Elf side. Finally, neither Snow Elves nor Dark Elves, have blue hair. 

 

You have 24 Hours to fix said mistakes. 

[LordCommander 163]

[LordCommander 163]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.