Leoniads 0 Share Posted September 25, 2011 Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name:mr_kabam -How old are you?: almost 15, so 14 -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: united states of america -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: im a freshmen at my local highschool. i play the saxophone and enjoy playing almost any game -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: i would have to say 2-4 hours -How long have you played minecraft?: since febuaray 2010, so close to 2 years -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: roleplaying is when people act out as characters and create stories. its fun, because each person has to be in character while playing. i have been playing rpgs for roughly 5 years. -What do you expect this server will be like?:a server with a giant community -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i have not played on big servers before, just small servers me and my friends set up with hamachi. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:i have read the rules and most of the lore, -Name the 4 races on this server. humans, dwarfs, elfs, orcs -How did you hear about us?: i saw the server trailer on youtube. -Did you vote?:yes. -What was your favourite Law?: No Griefing -What was your least favourite Law?:having to use the server skins. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? mr_kabam In-Character: -Character Name: leonidas -What is your Race?: elf -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:http: www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/user/24762-mr-kabam/ -Biography:leonidas was a young boy when he ventured into the woods with his father. His father was killed by a bear during the hunting trip,where he was teaching his son to hunt. leonidas wandered around for a day and night when he was found by a dwarven family. the family took him in, and raised him to be a dwarf. leonidas learned the skills of the blacksmiths, and after years ventured out to find his family. He began in the village of ravenhold, which is where his foster family told him they found him on the outskirts of. He travelled into the heart of the town, looking amongst the stalls and people for any hope of recognition. After many weeks sleeping in the alleys of ravenhold, he decided to go out hunting to earn some minas. after renting out his house, he continued the search for his family and friends. After years of searching, leonidas found out that after the loss of her husband and son, his mother had killed herself. leonidas plans on becoming in elven blacksmith in ravenhold, near the mine, continuing to hunt and earn money. he has high hopes on travelling to the human captial or Al'kahazar, or the Dwarven nation again. -Character Age:18 -Character Appearance: leonidas is a strong handsom elf, with the ability to do anything he sets his mind to. -Character Personality: he is a smart, hardworking, ambitious elf with extreme patience. -Your ambitions: to become a skilled elf with an ability to hunt, create, and make anything he wants. -Can your character read or write?:he can read fairly well, but cannot write -Can your character mine?:yes. -Are you a capable builder?:yes -Can you wield a sword?:yes, but he is better with bows -Enjoy Farming?: somewhat. -Does your character have any special skills?:use of redstone.] -A screenshot of your skin: -Other Information: his favorite inventions are pistons! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeolwyn The Elf 139 Share Posted September 25, 2011 You need to tell me exactly WHAT roleplaying is. You need to make a more extensive bio that includes your characters past, as well a hopeful future. You need to make your characters personality more in-depth. Once you have EDITED (Do NOT create a new post) your app, pm me and I will have another look. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeolwyn The Elf 139 Share Posted September 25, 2011 mr_kabam is not an Elven roleplaying name. Or even a roleplaying name in general. Change it please. Once you have EDITED (Do NOT create a new post) your app, pm me and I will have another look. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeolwyn The Elf 139 Share Posted September 25, 2011 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitebeard 126 Share Posted September 25, 2011 Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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