Already the seventh application off Ace PLEASE ANSWER

[Ace 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:rjv14

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:+1 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes i do have a good grip on english grammar because english is my bestest class (Joke!)

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Normally im at school from 8:30 A.M. to 3:10 P.M.

If i arrive to my home i want to relax so im going to the pc. In the evening i normally make my homework and if im done with that i can play on the server again!

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I think as shortest 15 hours a week and longest like 20 or 25

-How long have you played minecraft?:I have been playing Minecraft for about 5 to 6 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?:I realize that i have to get into the character and just feel like im him

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I hope it will be just as i think starting of with gathering wood. Then go to the human town and get a job to buy my own house

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on lots of servers but those where all lame (killing me!)

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Completely.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves.

-How did you hear about us?:The Yogscast

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Ace

In-Character:Ace

-Character Name:Ace

-What is your Race?: Human.

-Biography:When the young little baby Ace (named to Aegis) was born, Everyone felt something strange in the land of Aegis. And they knew a new human hero was born. But 2 months after he was born, his mother was killed when he was far in the woods. He was grown up with eating mushrooms and leaves. He also found a suit thats was growing with him. When he was 5 and able to walk, he was walking to a strange temple.

The temple of Aegis that is connected to a path so you can go to the four kinds of life: Humans, Dwarfs, Orcs and Elves. And there the adventure begins...

-Character Age: 14 years old

-Character Appearance: Wearing a ninja/eskimo suit with a king tint on it.

-Character Personality:Ace is really shy and doesn't want to go out to fight. But if theres someone in need, Ace will fight and give his life to save someone

-Your ambitions: Farming is something that Ace really likes, but someday he wants to find out who murderd his mother and want to kill him

-Can your character read or write?: Very well indeed.

-Can your character mine?:Yes my character can mine but doesn't wants to explore caves

-Are you a capable builder?:Ace is good in building when he knows what to build because he can't think about what to build and that can cost days.

-Can you wield a sword?:As i've said When someone is in need he will give his life to save someone

-Enjoy Farming?: He loves it

-Does your character have any special skills?:Using a Hoe will be the best skill i think

-A screenshot of your skin:See the attachment

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.