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[Galven Goldwind 0]

b]Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:GalvenTreenock

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:U.S.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: am still in school... ((imp only 14!)) so I won't be on much but, when I do get home I play minecraft ALOT. My last server was a creative server. I play on my friends server a lot though. Can't wait to get on!!!

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:2-4

-How long have you played minecraft?:a year

-What do you know about roleplaying?:role playing is that you take a role of a fictional Character that YOU or someone else creates. role-playing is also you becoming a different person. like a shy person in the outside world could be a king or a deadly thief . I've been role-playing since I could read and write. My main experience is D&D, I would go to my friends house just to play it

-What do you expect this server will be like?:fun

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: voxel box couldn't get on all the time

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

-Name the 4 races on this server:Humans, orcs, elfs, dwarfs

-How did you hear about us?:my friend

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Galven Goldwind

In-Character:

-Character Name: Ralven Silverfish

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: My name is Ralven Silverfish. When i was just 102 My parents died... The wretched Undead came... Curse them... They burned down my Tree... they killed them all.... I was the only to escape. My parents were killed and raised as zombies. I had to kill my OWN MOM!!!! She had tried to kill me... (Shudder) Anyways. I ran to the temple of Aegis. Bless them. They took me in and fed me. When I was 126 I left and wandered, Stealing when I could so, I did not die of hunger. When i was about 296, I found this man. His name was... hmm... OH it was Callum Dawner. ( (Real Friend-in game)) . he was about 19. His parents also died by the undead. So we joined up to fight back the undead. We will destroy the undead. Not even LIGTNING can stop us!!!

-Character Age:296

-Character Appearance: light grey eyes, black hair, 6", and skinny but fit.

-Character Personality: Self conserned and quiet

-Your ambitions:to Defeat the evil and to find a nice elven girl to settle down with

-Can your character read or write?: both

-Can your character mine?: yes but not well

-Are you a capable builder?:yes

-Can you wield a sword?:a little

-Enjoy Farming?: YES

-Does your character have any special skills?:Bow is the best weapon

-A screenshot of your skin: my skin

-Other Information:[/b

[Alana (Previously Latsi) 136]

Declined, please fix the following:

1) Fix grammar, punctuation, and spelling.

2) Elaborate on your answers.

3) Expand on your biography, give it a past and a future, and more of a story. Something must have happened it 296 years!