lilfuzz's applacation to Aegis

[lilfuzz 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Lilmill12

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: central/ pacific

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes i have very good grammar but not so good spelling

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:well i am always interested into new rpg games and i just love to read.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 10 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:three months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:yes i know about roalplay aand ive first played on it in runescape, fallout and world of warcraft

-What do you expect this server will be like?: fun with the community and i think i will be apel to interact moar with people with the smae intrest.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:ive played legondary craft and i did not like it icouldent do anything

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:yes i have

-Name the 4 races on this server. humans elves orcs dwarves

-How did you hear about us?:one of my Favorite youtubers potatoorgy

-Did you vote?: yes

-What was your favourite Law?:no greefing

-What was your least favourite Law?: you must keep in character

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? lilfuzz

In-Character:

-Character Name:lilfuzz

-What is your Race?:dwarf

-Biography:i am one of the smaller dwarfs but i am spending my time supplying the blacksmith with tho ore i find it gets a little hard to supply food sometimes but i find a way. i lov to help hunters and farmers its just an all around work time and i love to work so it keeps me happy

-Character Age:25

-Character Appearance:a dwarf with a black outfit dark blue eyes a dimond pick on his back and a brown beard/ hair

-Character Personality:kind helpful

-Your ambitions:to mine and help out the community

-Can your character read or write?:yes he is very intelligent

-Can your character mine?:yes he is one of the best miners of his race

-Are you a capable builder? yes he loves big builds and supplying people with the materiel they need

-Can you wield a sword?:yes he treys his best but it doesn't always workout for him

-Enjoy Farming?: yes i love all wiled life

-Does your character have any special skills?: speed run/ parkour getaways hes kinda stealthy too

-A screenshot of your skin: i cant get one

-Other Information: an all out helper to the people of Aegis

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