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The Reform of Oren

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The King of Oren; Edmund Sheffield has fallen, The Queen and Prince have died. There are no heirs eligible for the throne. There are many who contest the throne. Dawn Perea, Gaius Marius And Felix Farnsworth. Yes they are all good leaders but many points though about it

Felix Farnsworth is a strong leader and a smart one, But he has enough to run on his plate, Yes he can rule well but would he do well as the Leader of Oren?

Gaius Marius is applying force to push his own position and right to rule for Oren. If he gets into power, We would turn into a police state. And Yes showing tactical an physical power with the army, It does not fare well with the people who might die with his claim.

Dawn Perea Is a friendly woman, a peoples person but Unsurity for her own position though, Wealthy an famous all around Oren, But i do not think she would stand wise enough to be the Queen of Oren

The three main contesters as i have heard through gossip.

Now The Point i am putting across.

Does Oren really need a Monarchy, A time where one man rules with a small council. Kings can change and be turned to favour those who he is friendly with or those with a heavy and strong purse.

I have lived a long time, an traveled far And yes this may be one chapter in my journeys, it stands as a memorable chapter for those to read the novel of my life.

I state a peoples movement is what we do, for the nation of Oren. It is the wisest.

I propose several points.

A council of 11(or less depends if it is possible) people to rule Oren, With a council this big, There will be little chance for the entire party being corrupted at once

The Magnate - The counter and clerk of the finance and treasures that Oren possess

The Patron - The peoples listener, The person who stands with the crowds and listens to what people say, This role is one of high importance as they have to listen to what the people say and decide and act upon what is said

The Artisan - The one in charge of the Creation and development of Oren. This person is of a high architectural ability, and of good thinking as expansion and development for Oren's borders in which benefit the nation for better and for greater

The Judicator - This man leads the justice of Oren, The man who decides if a man is guilty or not, Though a very heavy role as lives are at this mans hands, He must determine on laws of the land for the safety and security of the kingdom.

The Explorer - Leading expeditions on exploration, He will also Aid the council on places to expand if there are places that are to be settled on. Though the expansion is not for Oren but for Humans and dwarves and elves and Orcs.

The Sword - In charge of the Military of Oren, They will decide where a battle is to be fought in, or ran from. They are wise in their rule as the Sword but must focus on also making sure that Oren is prepared for anything

The Shield - In charge of keeping the Morale of Oren up and preventing people from descending into chaos and madness. Their role will never falter in the task given to them. They will also be the Herald of Oren telling the people of the news

The Mercy - In charge of thinking on the decisions for the enemies of Oren. Be they and invader or a challenger They will work alongside the Judicator

The Crown - An ambassador of Oren, They shall work with the other nations in the campaigns against tyranny and evil. in the game of politics and the game of love

The Sage - A keeper and caretaker of the Arcane arts of magic. They will police those who use it and punish those who do not use it properly

The Spiritkeeper - The High priest of Oren shall guide All of us to a better life with peace and mind, Oren shall prosper and defeat her enemies with faith in her heart

The Thinker - A thinker and an inventor of contraptions and devices. The machines and constructs that is made is to be made to better Aegis not for destruction or war.

An 12th Seat will be kept in the Council for one man, chosen only when he dies by the other 10 holders of seats in the council, The Judge. He will watch and observe only and will watch if any of the seat holders try to push his own power up. For if he tries to bolster his own power, He has a risk of loosing all respect and his seat in the council. The Judge is to prevent that. The Judge will also have the final say on any great decisions should they come into conflict with other holders of the chair

The Political system is here to prevent corruption Within the council itself.

The Council chair holders are to be voted upon by the people each (4 weeks) time an election is called. The only person to not be voted for is the Judge. For he is reserved in power only by the choices of the Council. Once a man has become a council member he will have the task of his seat and he shall stay until The Judge expels him, He dies or when he is not voted for his seat again.

We know Horen is gone, But He knows we will rule his nation with pride. Even if there is no monarchy or bloodline to hold the rule of The kingdom. It shall be a wise thing as this is for the fate of Oren as a realm for Men, Women and Children

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i think that Felix is the best choice for ruler, Gaius would turn Oren into a police state, and Dawn is a cook, a very good cook, but still a cook. however the alternative is well considered, thought he rp of Oren is a monarchy, if there was a king, and the council, and neither party has any power on their own. forcing them to work together, or the 12th member could be the king.

these are just ideas, the decision is up to the people of oren

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Why disregard those of royalty? There is still royal blood among us, Brett is of Royal Descent and Dawn is a more intelligent and experienced in leading the Kingdom than you give her credit for.

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There is another choice.....Saint Daniel the Great, the first of his name! The grand architect, defender of the North! All for Saint Daniel say Aye!

If he is not a choice I would support Dawn because Felix is very busy and Gaius is dead.....

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I agree a Democracy seems in order for the events that have occurred in Oren over the past several years. Although I fear tradition will triumph over newer ideas. Although this idea of yours would help Oren get back on its feet.

((by the way I would love to take position of the sage in this council if one is ever needed))

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St. Daniel Yes he created Oren he will keep it alive

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Why disregard those of royalty? There is still royal blood among us, Brett is of Royal Descent and Dawn is a more intelligent and experienced in leading the Kingdom than you give her credit for.

Dawn is a cook, yes she would be a good leader, but right now we need a warrior

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For the time being, as of the poor state Oren stands at, a Temporary ruling group could lead. It could Consist of 7 or 9 members, so that decissions can be made without a tie. Oren doesn't need to have a Monarchy, for it has driven the king himself insane.

On the topic, I would greatly take the position of the honorable position of Spiritkeeper if it is to come to the plan.

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Walks in and is appalled at the grand accusation

A Police State?! Pray tell you have evidences of such thing?

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Violence has gotten Oren where it stands now. Just get a Council and rebuild the broken.

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The idea of a 'Parliment' does seem like a smart choice for Oren. The creation of this kind of system would mean that decisions would be more carefully chosen and corrected which would be good for Oren as in my opinion a few things in Oren do need to be re-structured.

-Kirrekith

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The faster Oren figures out one man and a small group of people can't rule a nation on its own, the faster we can rebuild the town, Including the church.

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As The Nephew of The Perea Family, I Prince Silent Drayzont do not wish to be a single ruler. I am sure a lot of people want a council. As a part of the royal Family I only ask to be on the Council. Besides, the next ruler in line for the Throne is Dawn, Then Lord Brett Then me. Only if they pass it up, am I given the Oppourtunity to be King. I'm sure a lot of you may agree, some may disagree but It is all up to you.

Your Prince

-Silent Drayzont

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Well, silent here would make a great part for "The Crown" Redskye was talking about.

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