[Denied]MIngslys 5th application

[Glurg_Howdan 7]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Mingsly

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:GMT:england

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes but my spellings not great so you will have to put up with some mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a lover of computer games, and spend all the time im not a school playing them.I am addicted to minecraft and basically its all i thik about.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:A minimum of 7 hours a week but ocassionally more

-How long have you played minecraft?:About 1-2 months, (i joined about when 1.6.6 was realesed)

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I know its is playing a game through your character's eyes and not your own, Like if there was a big choice in your charcters life you would have to think "what would my character do?" not "what would i do" because normally they would do completely different things

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it will be a fun server with a very high focus on roleplay witch is what ive been looking for since i started playing the game.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i have played on 3 servers, isocraft, tregmine and crockcraft. I left them all because i wanted a more in-depth RolePlaying experience.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server:The main races are dwarves, elfs, humans and orcs. But there are many subraces and the undead

-How did you hear about us?:My friend (MadFlumlajig) told me he wanted to apply for this server but didnt understand the white list form so he asked me for help. I told him how to apply after reading the form for myself and decided that this was the type of server id been looking for so i read up on it and thought yes this is the server for me.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: mingsly

In-Character:

-Character Name: Glurg_Orcan

-What is your Race?: Orc: no subrace

-Biography: Glurg is a small, queit orc who never really got on with any other orcs. The orc clan had treid to abandon him in the desert many times but Glurg always managed to get back. The rex of the tribe started a war against some dwarves and made Glurg join the first battle. Glurg killed eight people in that battle and started to ask himself "why?". He was really unsure of himself from then on and let the other orcs abandom him. Glurg became a vegitaren and wandered around the mountains on the outskirts of Ageis, stopping in any libarys and bookshops he came to, to see if he could find out why orcs were so viloent and why he was so diffrent. He never could find the answer. Glurg was robbed while wondering the mountains and after punching the robber said sorry and gave them his money. From that day on he has become a pacifist and has sworn never to use vilonce, of any kind, again. While in the mountains he passed a town, and there he learned about Ageis and decided to travel there. He arrives in Ageis hoping to find out why orcs love killing so much.

-Character Age:50

-Character Appearance: Glurg is 5ft tall witch is very small for an orc. He is dark green and has very dark brown hair, with red war paint on his face and chest to try to scare robbers before they attack.

-Character Personality: Glurg is a quiet orc who prefers to be by himself then with anyone else (including other orcs), He is shy and retiring and doesnt like pyhiscal contact. He is hardly ever angry or in a bad mood and he is very hard to wind up.

-Your ambitions: His ambition is to find out why orcs love war and killing as much as they do. Also part of him would like to find love and settle down with a wife

-Can your character read or write?: Yes he is very good at both.

-Can your character mine?: Yes but hes not the best miner in the world

-Are you a capable builder?:Not really. all he can build are makeshift shelters to spend the night in.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes but he doesnt like violence so he doesnt use them

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes. Farming is the only thing that he can do to get food and he finds it really rewarding as well.

-Does your character have any special skills?:Yes He is very good at dimplomacy and peace making

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/580/20111013194426.png/

-Other Information: im a little slow sometimes so give me a chance to work it out and i will

[Aeolwyn The Elf 139]

DENIED

Make a better bio.

[Glurg_Howdan 7]

how? whats considered a better bio?

[calvinnok 2]

Note: I am not a moderator nor a member of the application team

I think you have to improve your grammer in this application a bit, and make the biography more sensible.

Hope you can be accept in the next application

[Mahoney220 6]

Say your in english class, you have to wright a essay. I was like "Omg" i have to wright a Bio! Just have to get it started and you can do it no problem.

Start like, 1320 a boy has been born, The kings son none the less. and go on how he grows up to move to {Read the lore and find your races city and put name), easy as that. Once you get it started its a piece of cake, you just want to keep wrighting.

Good luck, you can do it.

[Glurg_Howdan 7]

ok thanks everyone for your comments