New Capital Layout

[Viraj Dobrial 321]

This is my new layout idea for the Aaun capital. What do you think?


 
                                                                                                                                                    hospitol (for hurt peeple)
                                                                                                                                                                                   Norland Embasie                                       ____________________________
                                                                                                                                                                                chirch 2 (druid palace)                                /  druid observation tower \                                                                                                                      \                                                                     palace                                               |                                            |
                                                                                                                      |  ______________________________________--  chirch                                                |                                            |
                                                                                                                            _______________________________________|                                                          | unattended boomsteel     |
                                                                                                                            |                                                                                                                        | (property of Oren)             |
          farms                                                                                                                                                  bank                                                          ___________|____________________________|__________________________
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          |                  |   win                                                       jail observation bridge
                                                                                                                              |                markit area                                                         |       jail     |    dow      _________________________________________________
                    more farm                                                                                                           ___________________________________________                 ____|__________|
                                                                                                                                                                                                     |
                                                                                                                                                                                                      |             |                                                           ___________________
                                                                                                                                                                                       ___________           | ________                                               backup bridge parts
                                                                                                                               government place                          |                                        |                                               ______________
                                                                                                                                                                                       |                                             court                              ___________________________
                                                                                                                                                                                       | __________|          |                                                 \                 second bridge                    Aaun 2
 docks                                                                                                                                                                      |  ________________________  |                                      |             |-----------------------
                                                                       /-------------\                                                                                            |   __switchback          ___________                               |             |
                                                                     /                         \                                                              justic                                   |          |                                                  |          |
                                                                   /                             \                                                                                                        |          |______________________________  |        |
                                                                  |    smol :3 house     |                                                                                                       |                                                                     |
                                                                  |                                 |                                                                                                      |    *                           second bridge (cont) |
                                                                  |             more           |                                                                  e                                  |          |_____________________________________|
                              second docks           |__auxillary boomsteel|                                                                                                  |          |
                                                                |            riserve              |                                                                                                 | bridge|
                                                                 |_______________________|                                                                                                  |          |                                                                                 bridge troll apartment
                                                                                                                                                                                                         |          |
                                                                                                                                                                                                         |          |

 

 

 

 

SO! What do you think? Sorry, I coudn't attach an image (and I accidentally deleted MS paint :(      )

EDIT: my layout got messed up. Mods, can you help with this?



UPDATE: City schematic has been fixed!!!!! Take a look:

 

                   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
                   |                                               Shopping Center                            hospital (small)
                   |treasure chest
                   |1
 /\  /\  /\       _|_______________                    Druid Palace
 ||  ||  ||                                         Temple and Church                                                              THE PIT
                  _________________                New Government Building                                     housis          
                                  |                                                                      __________________________________
                                  |                                                                     |
                                  |                                                   jail observation  |
                                  |           Pvp Arena Pit                                             |   boomsteel well (unattended)
                                  |                                                                     |
                                  |                                        _____________________________|             _____________________
                                  |                                        |                            |            |
            farms                 |       marketplase                      |                            |            |
                                  |                                        |           jail             |            |      To Norland
                                  |                                        |                            |            |
                                  |                                        |                            |            |   __________________
                                  |________________________________________ |___________________________|  water     |   |
                                                                     |||||| |                           |            |   |
                                                                     |||||| |                           |            |   |
                                                                     |||||| |jail observation deck 1    |troll hut   |   |
                                                                     |||||| |                           |            |   |
                                                                     |||||| |                           |____________|   |                                                          more farms                   |||||| |                                            |
                                                                     |||||| |                                 bridge 1   |
                                                                     |||||| |                             _______________|
                  poor people                                        ||-----|                            |                                                                                                       ||                                  |
                               __________________                    |      _____________________________|
                              /                  \                   |     |
                              |   smol house :3  |                   |bridg|
                              |                  |                   |e 2  |
                              |                  |                   |     |
                              |                  |                   |     |
        more farms            |                  |                   |     |
                              |     boomstel     |                   |     |
                              |auxilary storage  |                   |     |
                              |                  |                   |     |                 /---------\
                                                                     |     |                |           |
                                                                     |     |                |  troll    |
                                                                     |     |                |  apartment|
                                                                     |     |                |           |
                                                                     |     |                |           |
                                                                     |     |                |___________|
         docks                                                             |     

 

 

                                        harbour

 

 

 

[cadazio 2105]

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[christman 3529]

i like this layout

[Cheese 8883]

I agree

[Viraj Dobrial 321]

On 1/14/2024 at 8:58 PM, Myochii said:

plz post without layout mess up i am VERY VERY VERY curious to see how this masterpiece could get any better

I'm workin' on it!!!!