Vanhallin's Application

[Vanhallin 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Vanhallin

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: U.S. Mountaintime, United States of America

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I'm have a good grasp, but I do have trouble with spelling(I'm dyslexic). Also everybody slips up once and a while.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm in 8th grade. I like to play PC games such as Minecraft, Civ 5, TF2, APB, and Mount and Blade:Warband.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 10-20 hours

-How long have you played Minecraft?: For 8 months.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: It is where you play as a character, world, etc., and is transfered through a medium. Characters are Minecraft.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: The server will be well built not a bunch of boxes or 1x1 towers. The PvP will not just raids but will also lead into politics and wars.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Free build server(died out), and a PvP server that is up but player base is dropping.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: Orcs, Humans, Dwarfs, Elfs

-How did you hear about us?: Redskye

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Vanhallin

In-Character:

-Character Name: Vanhallin

-What is your Race?: Human( I would like to be in the Oren KIngdom).

-Biography: I grow up in small farming village outside a a small town in east. I ventured often to the town in search of jobs and other handy tricks and could use to support my family. Sins my family was farmers they didn’t owe that much money. But there crops of vegetables was know trough the county. A few years ago A band of bandits called the Ravenhawk clan pillaged our small farm village. My family was hit the hardest, they burnt down our home and stole all the money we had collected. My mother was so sad so she hanged her self in the burned down barn. My father wasn’t home when this tragedy happened, he had ventured of to far of land in search of glory and fame. I felt so left out of society that decided to make my self stronger. So I ventured to the small town and took up three apprenticeships as carpentry, blacksmith. One day a strange man appeared in town. I saw he wasn’t from around here. So I went up to him and ask if I could follow him at first. But he said no, but kept on pushing him till he said yes. This man , who later learned was Redskye the plain walker. He taught me art of the sword. As fast I mastered it he vanished into thin air and I never saw him, but I hoped that i would see him and thank him for this gift.

-Character Age: 20

-Character Appearance: Brown hair, 5”6, brown eyes, Strongly built, and is broad shouldered.

-Character Personality: Courageous, tactical, cunning, and deceptive.

-Your ambitions: To become a high ranking in the military, and restore glory to my family's name

-Can your character read or write?: Yes I can both read and write.

-Can your character mine?: He can but isn't skilled in the profession

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes he can build well.

-Can you wield a sword?: He is very capable of wielding a sword.

-Enjoy Farming?: He knows how to but doesn't enjoy it all.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is able to think of new tactics, and is also good at redstone working and engineering.

-A screenshot of your skin: Front:http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/7/20111024110629.png/

Back:http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/705/20111023224645.png/

-Other Information: Nothing much besides above.

[Ivrae 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-You're an orphan.

-You didn't double space.

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/