Tiburon414's application

[Tiburon414 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Tiburon414

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:(UTC-06:00) Central Time (US & Canada)/Texas

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Mostly but not always.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Hi,my name is tiburon414 and i would like to be apart of this server.I have allwas been the man of my word and nice and friendly.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:5 day approx.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:1 year

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:I dont know about roleplaying but i hope it will be fun.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect it to be wonderful and good.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:digital warzome and the reason why i left is that my chest keep getting wipped

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

-Name the 4 races on this server:orc,human,dwarf,undead

-How did you hear about us?:My friend told me about this server.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Tiburon414 or Tibuton414

In-Character:

-Character Name:Tiburon_The_Great

-What is your Race?:Dwarf

-Biography:The story of me is that i was a dwarf,son of a sales man.When i was born i tryed to knock sence into the people that call me shorty and stuff.When i got older my father had grown elderly sick and i had too help the family.when i was on the way to work i found a book.when i opened the book it granted me 1 wish.I dident know what to wish for but i did my best.right after i asked for unlimited wishes i used my wishes for good.Thats my life story.

-Character Age:34

-Character Appearance:Has a brown coat and dark brown eyes and brown hair and is white.

-Character Personality:nice,friendly and a commidean

-Your ambitions:To dread this world of its posin.

-Can your character read or write?:yes he can fairly do both because he went to school.

-Can your character mine?:yes because his cousin tought him to.

-Are you a capable builder?:yes because his uncle was a great builder. y

-Can you wield a sword?:not that much but sometimes.

-Enjoy Farming?:nope because his tention spand is bad to farming

-Does your character have any special skills?:He can trick people and tell corny jokes.

-A screenshot of your skin:http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/200/20111023194821.png/

-Other Information:nothing

[Ivrae 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-You're an orphan.

-You didn't double space.

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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