Nickdabeast135 Application Submission

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Out-Of-Character:

nick

-Minecraft Account Name:

nickdabeast135

-How old are you?:

19

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern US

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a player looking for a good RP server. I play a good amount of Minecraft and will be an active player on your server. I pretty much go to school, then to tennis practice, then to Minecraft or any other computer games that I play.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

5-10 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:

almost a year. (since beta 1.2)

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

I have been on a zombie roleplay server. Zombie roleplay is where you act as part of a survivalist town and I was a miner for the town. I did the daily jobs for the king and made some money on the iconomy system. I have done roleplay outside of that for a good amount of time.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think that it will be a lot of fun, and know a couple people on this server and plan to work with them as a miner and a dwarf. I've seen videos of the fights on youtube and it looks like a lot of fun.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Immortal realms, Vindicraft, Medieval craft, and a couple others. I left them because they each were good, but none of them could hold so many players and had such an interesting topic.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yes i have.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Human, Dwarfs, Elves, and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:

Through a friend and youtube vids

-Did you vote?:

Yes i did.

-What was your favourite Law?:

That each player must act in role, and have the skin of their race.

-What was your least favourite Law?:

none

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

nickdabeast135

In-Character:

Aremitus

-Character Name:

Aremitus

-What is your Race?:

Dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

nickdabeast135

-Biography:

Armetius was created in the cloud temple with no family and no legacy of his own. He was lost and confused for the first 25 years of his life when he was a young man. Then he went off into the deserts (which is orc territory) and tried to mine down to the furthest depths that he was able to. Then he fell into an open cave and landed on a massive rock. He broke his arm and was crippled. Then after around an hour and orc patrol found him and took him back to the captial city and imprisoned him for spying.

He was tortured in a prison cell for around 3 years and then a large dwarf raid broke into the prison and freed him from his cell. He was ever grateful for the dwarves kind act and left exile from the kingdom and went into service for the king. He did many jobs and services for him and was given the privilege of joining the army in a higher rank. He went on to lead many battles that he is taking part in even to today.

-Character Age:

94.

-Character Appearance:

Black beard, muscular

-Character Personality:

Rough, unforgiving. He is also scarred because of a previous event.

-Your ambitions:

Aremitus plans to mine for the dwarf king, get revenge on the orcs, and help bring order to the kingdom

-Can your character read or write?:

Yes

-Can your character mine?:

Yes

-Are you a capable builder?

Yes

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes

-Enjoy Farming?:

Yes

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

Good at wielding an axe

-A screenshot of your skin:

Attached the application

-Other Information:

Since Aremitus was captured by the orc army he was tortured badly so that one of his arms was broken and never set back. So one of his arms (his left) moves alkwardly and sometimes hurts so that he can't use it on occasion.

[Haldon 72]

Denied

Points to improve:

-This app is good! but there are a few things on it that need improving. Mainly, You didn't tell me what you think rolplaying is.

- The second, no one word answers please. Expand on those last few questions.

- And lastly, I want you to expand more on your character in your biography. I want to be able to get a strong feeling of his character.

Once you have made these changes, PM me and I will take a look at your new application. Don't rush through it though, take your time. :)