Gre7's Second Applicationn

[gre7 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: gre7

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:PDT/U.S.A

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I truly hope so.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I come home from school and the first thing I think of is Minecraft, so I hop on my computer and begin to play.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 6-12 hours

-How long have you played Minecraft?: Around a year.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: It is where you create a character and you act as your character would act if this was all real.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Challenging, because I like being on top and with so many people that will not be easy.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I used to play on RandomQ's Anarchy Server until it started running out of people and I left. I intend to do much less killing on here then I did there.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yep.

-Name the 4 races on this server: There are more then 4 there are Human, Dwarf, Elf, Ork, Undead and Asended.

-How did you hear about us?: A completely random internet search that wasn't even Minecraft related. You guys look awesome.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: gre7

In-Character:

-Character Name: Balez

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: I read that you may have a underdeveloped character and still have access, so that is what I shall do. One day Balez woke up in a crater surrounded by a forest. His whole body was burned especially his face and he could remember nothing. The only thing he could find to even hint at his true identity was a small scrap of singed paper in his pocket that read "nd Balez H". The rest of the words before and after his new found name were to hard to make out. Balez eventually began wandering in the forest until he came to a small settlement and this is where the true story begins. To Be Continued

-Character Age:30

-Character Appearance: Scared by his burned and ashamed of it. He hides his face.

-Character Personality: Quiet, and solemn. He sees how messed up the world is and wants to right it, but his ultimate goal is to learn his true identity.

-Your ambitions: To Learn and change the world

-Can your character read or write?: He reads, but he does not know how he learned

-Can your character mine?: If necessary.

-Are you a capable builder?: He does not have great skills as a builder

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes

-Enjoy Farming?: He can, but he finds no joy in it.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is a skilled bowman and is very creative.

-A screenshot of your skin:

Got it.

-Other Information: I posted this before I should have, because I am leaving on a youth group retreat on Friday and will be gone for the whole weekend. I just wanted to get it out of the way and I really don't care if you don't Accept or Deny me until the 2 days are up.

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Your character biography is too short.

Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

Overall this lacks effort.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/