Maxsos55's Application

[Gallan 2]

How old are you?:12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I get “A” every year in English.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I love games like Minecraft! I was born in Canberra, Australia. I have the cutest puppy ever called Jett!

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 4-5 hours

How long have you played minecraft?:A good year now!

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I play a MMORPG Called World of Warcraft, you probably know it, I’m level 85!

What do you expect this server will be like?:From what I’ve heard from my friends, Epic!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I had my own but I heard about this and decided to try it out instead of my server!

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes, they made a lot of sense and I totally agree with them.

Name the 4 races on this server. Orc, Elf, Human and Dwarf!

How did you hear about us?:My friends and a Server List website.

Did you vote?:Yes, I mean why not?

What was your favourite Law?:No destroying landscape.

What was your least favourite Law?:No, I thought they were all fair and made total sense.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Maxsos55

Character Name: Delarian Leathson

What is your Race?: Human

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Sorry, I do not understand? I have entered my account name.

Biography: When Delarian was young, his father was killed by some raiders. Delarian swore to avenge him. He is now a farmer but when he earns enough, he will venture far and wide in search of his father’s murderers.

Character Age:25

Character Appearance: Strong and very handsome. Blonde semi-long blond hair. With Old farmer’s clothes.

Character Personality: Kind but hot tempered when dealing with enemies and personal affairs. Funny but serious.

Your ambitions: To join the Military in hope of one day avenging his Father.

Can your character read or write?: Yes.

Can your character mine?: Yes, but has not had much experience.

Are you a capable builder? Sheds and farmhouses, so a bit.

Can you wield a sword?:Certainly, he has practices with his father’s sword often.

Enjoy Farming?:No, but he has to do it.

Does your character have any special skills?: Has once conjured a Firebolt but is unsure how.

A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/world-of-kaladra/ <===== It's in the picture.

Other Information: Hopes to get accepted.

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography (you need to develop your biography a bit more) and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... Also you need to explain your character traits in terms of your character, why can he mine? why can he fight or not etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned.

[Gallan 2]

Please give me proper help and don't judge my second one BECAUSE I WANT FEEDBACK! :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: