[Denied]Omgitscodyo's Application. (Far'lion)

[Far'Lion 0]

Wait, it was someone I was talking to in my mumble chat, from minesworn. He was telling me how to fix my application.... It was the metagaming / powergaming part because I didn't know what it was. I asked him to explain it to me, then I changed it from his words to mine. That part of the app my friend told me what to put, I just reworded what he said pretty much. I didn't know what metagaming or powergaming was so I asked him, and he pasted something for me to put. And it made sense so I editted it a bit and put it in the app. Everything else I writ ): when may I be able to apply again then?

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: Minecraft IGN- omgitscodyo

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No I did not. I would of, if I had the money to travel and get in to it though.

How old are you?: I am 17.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Time Zone, United States.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes,English was my first language and primary language.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: My name is Cody, I am a Senior in High School, i'm from Los Angeles, California. I enjoy RPG's of different variety. This server seemed interesting and some friends suggested it to me.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: The time will differ, I have thing's I must do outside of games and school, but I do play alot. Especially on breaks. Probally around 8 hours a week, with no school maybe 6 hours a day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Roleplaying to me is living a different life, something you could of had in a different reality.I get to pick who I am without being stuck in a certain role. You can be whoever, or whatever you wanted to be.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. (Friend clarified for me.)Metagaming is using knowledge from non-roleplaying situatuions and using it to benefit the character in some way and Powergaming is basically using cheap tactics to get to the end content like cheating. It kills the game, and does not make it a fun experience for other people. [Editted]

What do you expect this server will be like?: It seems like it will be fun, some friends told me it has tons of PvP and lots of RP, so I will love it! I love Rppvp. It will be amazing :b if i'm accepted of course.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: The server I mostly played on is Minesworn. I still play on it. It's a fun pvp server. I'm not leaving the server, just looking for something different (:

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, the rules are common sense for the most part, I have read them several times to be sure.

How did you hear about us?: From several people in Minesworn. Who I talk to in mumble (a speech program similar to ventrilo.)

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Yes I have, I am vote 3086. IGN Omgitscodyo.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:My username is omgitscodyo but my display name is Far'Lion. You will be seeing me around the forums with the name Far'Lion.

In-Character:

Character Name: My name is Far'Lion, son of Amaguk, Orc Knight from Krugmar.

What is your Race?: I am Orc.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): My name is Far'Lion. My father was high knight of Krugmar. He was assigned to defend the Earl there....I cannot remember his name, for I was young then. While my father was defending when I was about 4 in human years the town became under siege by bandits...humans. The humans killed my father. They pillaged the town, killed all family and friends, except me and my brother. My brother Laktar,17 at the time, carried me out of our burning house, we fled from Krugmar, or what was left of it. While we were fleeing, we were followed. My brother left me in an abandoned house as he fought off the bandits. He yelled out to me "Run brother, I cannot fight them off for long!" So I fled. I don't know what has happened to my brother. I was taken in by a group of adolescent Orc refugees from Krugmar who had escaped, they were differing in age from 8-17. They raised me, at the age of 10 I left them. It has been 4 years since, I've been hopping town to town trying to make a living. I am now 14, as tall as human doors. I have a muffled, burned face from the fires of my burning house as a child. I am scar'ed from head to toe. I have picked up on English and lost my native tongue, for my father never taught me. The adolescent's I was with only taught me what they knew. My personality would show hatred towards humans, yet comedic in some ways to everyone including them.

Your characters ambitions: To return Krugmar to the way it used to be, to follow in my father's footsteps and defend Krugmar to death. To get revenge on the bandit's that murdered my family.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Far'Lion would contemplate rushing into combat and massacring the two bandits, showing his hatred towards them.He would yell out to them and questions what is wrong with them and why they are attacking this puny filth, what we call an elf.If they answer in a wrong tone or with a smart remark Far'Lion would then decide these bandits must be destroyed. He would then draw his sword, signaling he is ready for a fight. And a fight he will give them, thrusting his sword into them quickly and with ease.Then question why the elf had been attacked by them. Then leave the elf to loot their corpses. He needs nothing but his sword, and the clothes on his back. [Editted to fit the Roleplaying element of the server.]

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? My character would answer "Hello, I need new sword. Sword is broken. Used to kill bandits, can still use to kill you. You give me sword, I leave."

Screenshots of my skin:

One of my bases in minesworn in the background.

http://troll.ws/sbUqz5

http://troll.ws/eBrcyn

[Groobs03 297]

You fixed up nicely :)

Welcome to Aegis!

Please be patient while a moderator promotes you in game.

[Groobs03 297]

Moved to Accepted Forum

[Respiren 524]

I'm going to have to overturn this, he's used material from another person's application for some of the RP questions

[Groobs03 297]

I'm going to have to overturn this, he's used material from another person's application for some of the RP questions

By any means, I was suspicious but had no idea how to search for such.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Ditto. How did you know it was plagiarism?

[Alys 2]

If something seems fishy, you can pick a somewhat unique word and paste it in the search bar. In this case, something like the word "situatuions" (which is oddly spelt). Sure enough, there have been three applications today that have plagiarized these definitions from Kronix's app.

[Respiren 524]

Yes I just banned 4 people for plagiarising kronix's app, this guy looks like he may be a good RP'r he needs to write his own definitions though.

The' continuing changing, rollplay and un-roleplaying were quite unique to kronix's app,

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/33566-kronixs-application/page__p__210462__fromsearch__1#entry210462

'non-roleplaying' (slightly reworded)' seemed slightly too familiar in this one.

Besides that, good app :rolleyes:

[CosmicWhaleShark 2488]

Respiren is this guy banned from re-applying as well?