Shadowscyth243's 3Rd Try

shadowscyth243 · February 3, 2012

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

shadoscyth243 and yes it is all lowercase

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

no

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GMT United States: Mexico City

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

yes English is my First Language

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Im funny i play Minecraft, and skyrim a lot i'm also a pretty good Rper

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

12 or so hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

It is a were you "put on someone elses skin" so to speak to have fun and live "their" life3

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

meta gaming and Powergaming are pretty much cheating be means of chat of out of server info sources such as giving someone cords. to a hidden location not know by their character. This can also someone attacking someone with NO ability to defend or react to the situation

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Amazing, if there was a better word id say it.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: a lot, latest was land of legand i left because of the fact it was a RP server but mostly NPCs and maybe 3 people who just ranted on not even RPing

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yep word for word, and yes

How did you hear about us?:

Through Youtube i watched a Lets play by Candle

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? yes, and it doesn't show one

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

shadowscyth243

In-Character:

Character Name:

Leaf Telvoni

What is your Race?:

Wood Elf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Leaf Telvoni was born in the Asulon His mother a refuge on her way to Asulon from the crumbling Ageisis Rose Telvoni (her maiden name is Arku) died while giving birth to leaf. Leaf's father Histor Telvoni was a architect.As soon as leaf was old enough to walk he loved animals. At the age of 15 he got his first bow, his father taught him in the way of fletching. (making of bows and arrows) and taming wolfs. A family friend an human named Brom taught him the ways of Blacksmithing and how to be stealthy at the age of 20 his dear friends Adrok and Know and himself set off to explore the world. As he charted the forest he was rewarded in his knowledge of taming wolfs. By the time they reached the border the had 4 tamed wolfs. Adrok had on named Blaze, also Kno had on its name was Breeze. Leaf had 2 Boulder and Blade, the they passed through 3 small towns selling their goods as teh went. Somewhere outside a small town they where ambushed by 3 Bandits.They tried to talk their way out of it but the bandits wouldn't budge so the attacked Leaf, Adrok, and Kno killed 1 bandits before losing their ground. Kno was the first to go, the Adrok. Leaf slowly fended off the bandits tell all of the bandits where dead. He dragged his Friends corpses to a Large tree and dug under the base of the tree. Then he preformed the finial rights and laid them to rest. Leaf stayed by that tree for 12 Years built a shack and lived of the land. At the age of 35 he left the area and traversed his way to back to the heart of Asulon.

Your characters ambitions:

To live a kind life helping toughs in need.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

hide in rear by bushes and Down the bandits with a bow and some arrows

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

Hail, do you have and rooms or Food?

Yes i do the rooms are 12 minas and the food is 5 minas ok ill take to rooms and 12 melons.

ok when will you retire to your room. give the rooms to the 2 beggars outside and half of the melons as well.

Well such a kind heart ok it will be done

*hands of the minas* ok then ill be back in a fortnight.

A screenshot of your skin:

Skin link *try this if you want to see the skin 360*

Other info: Note the so called "powers" were recalled and added as things a normal player could learn. no his friends did not have any "powers" Leaf tamed the wolfs and gave them the wolfs. The elf king was deleted and as for lore I can find none help full. If this is Denied again for a reason such as lore can you please post a link in the comments so I can Better this application. Thank you and have a nice day. P.S. on the elf subject i suggest using the link you can turn the skin and then you can see the Pointy ears.

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James Undercroft · February 3, 2012

Denied

This is why you were denied:

Your definition for roleplay could do with some "Spicing Up"

I would like you to get into more detail as to what roleplaying is. Perhaps add an example or two of a game or a place where roleplaying may happen.

Your definitions for metagaming and powergaming are merged.

While you probably do understand what they mean, I would like you to seperate them and put them into different paragraphs, just so I can be sure you know they are not the same thing.

Your biography needs to be improved.

First of all I would like you to see more lore in your biography, this can be anything from names of towns and kingdoms, to perhaps events which you or your character's parents saw and told to you.

Elves mature at a much slower rate then the other species, so the age of your character would not be correct. There is some debate over the actual RATE of growth and development, but the majority seem to agree that over the age of 200 is about the age of full maturity.

Please include the entire question, namely "appearance and personality". Do not just write "He is tall and has blonde hair." Be as descriptive as possible, explain your character to the finest detail you can possibly think of, although make sure it matches your skin as well as you can (of course things like freckles, moles or other minor details can be RP'd and do not have to be on your skin).

Your answers to the RP questions need improvement.

Do not just write a single sentence. I need you to write a full paragraph with as much description that you can think of, which includes dialogue of the people involved in the siutation. Make sure you do not break any laws of the server (particularly the no-rp kill one), if you think you may then re-read the rules of the server.

Even the second one can be done better. Avoid writing emotes in *these* for your answers, but instead write them as you would a story. Please use "quotation marks" while writing the speach of each of the people invovled.

Do not post another application within a day or that application will be skipped.

Please do send a PM my way if you are having any trouble understanding the application process or my feedback, I would be glad to help you. :)

Good luck for your next application!

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

Tips to definitely include on your application:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A must-read guide to the world of aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis

How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character: