Application

[Dalsirus 3]

out of character: dalsirus

Minecraft Account Name: dalsirus

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the lotc booth:

no i did not attend minecon but i wish i could have

How old are you:

15

Time-zone/country of residence

Australia EDT

Do you have a good grip on the english language/grammer:

I think my skills are sufficient

2-3 Sentence Description of your self:

im a fun person i enjoy hanging out with my friends. My hobbies are computer gaming, of a weekend i play D&D, i like sport and active games. But if i had a choice it would be to stay home and play minecraft

How much time could you be on this server a weekly:

5-10 hours

what do you know about roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means:

Roleplaying is when you take on the roles of character and interact how he or she would act

In your own word, describe what metagaming and powergameing are:

metagaming is when you use out of character infomation

Powergaming is using your abilities without giving the other player a fair chance to react. example i jump out from a bush and i punch the bandite out and tie up the bandit with rope. i would have to warn them and give them a fair chance to react.

What do you expect this server to be like: i am hoping this server to be fun and packed full of rolpaying which i hear it is, so i am looking forward to it.

What other servers have you been on and why did you leave them:

I have been on many server and there have been numbers of reasons

like bad admins lag and a bad community and many more

have you read and understood, agreed to the rules?:

yes i have read and agreed to all the rules

How did you hear about us?:

from a friend, shadowmage1291 and m00np1e

Have you voted for the lotc on minestatus? which vote number were you

yes i have voted, number 4,031

What is your the lotc fourm account name?: dalsirus

In character name: dalsirus

Charecter name: dalsirus

What is your race?:

elf

Biography 1-4:

1 History: My elf grew up in a dence forest area of Malinor, his parents we great hunters themselves so they taught him how to be one. One day when he was out hunting, his village and family was burnt down in a massive bush fire that burnt down a small part of Malinor. He used the skills that he had learnt from his parents to survive. One dark night, he came under attack by some zombies, he grabbed his bow and arrows. He fired the first arrow, it pierced the zombies head, and the zombie fell to the ground. He quickly drew the next arrow firing it at the zombies chest wounding it. Suddenly a zombie hit him from behind, he staggered back up to his feet and stabbed the zombie with his arrow, as he slowly took the arrow from the zombies eye he could hear more coming behind him. He ran to his house grabbing his sword and the rest of his arrows as he ran back out into the dark. He was surrounded by these creatures. A tree caught his eye, using the skills that he was taught by his parents he climbed the tree with incredible speed and found a stable branch. He shot the zombies from there. 1 zombie then 2 zombies then 3 zombies now layed dead on the ground all with arrows in their heads. Suddenly sssssssssssssss BOOM! A creeper done its deed and blew up the bottom of the tree, the tree began to creek and then it collapsed managing to take out several zombies in the process. As Dalsirus got up drawing his sword, an arrow the he didn’t fire hit a zombie in the knee, that zombie now started crawling towards him, then another one in its chest. As Dalsirus looked behind him there were some mercenaries being led by a strange hooded man. Dalsirus confronted them and requested to join, the mercenaries and the hooded man spoke and agreed to let him join. They travelled for days clearing out multiple dungeons and caves. One cave which seemed to interest the hooded man was surrounded by some sort of weird symbols. The hooded man told them to clear the cave and meet him outside when they had done. As the brave mercenaries entered the cave the hooded man used a spell that sealed the entrance with some sort of purple rock (obsidian). The mercenaries took shifts of digging, if they weren’t digging they were fighting off the oncoming waves of zombies, skeletons and creepers. They all were getting tired but Dalsirus and 3 other mercenaries were constantly fight off the mobs, one time they were caught off guard Dalsirus turned quickly to see the face of a zombie about to attack but Dalsirus was very quick on his feet and duck, he then pulled out his sword and stapped the zombie through the chest. More were coming to the remaining mercenaries all drew what ever weapon they had and ran into the horde, some of the dead mercenaries rose as the very things they hated, zombies. Dalsirus cut a zombies head off and then stabbed on through the throat. He then pull out his bow and drew and arrow firing it at a zombie and hitting it straight in the head saving one of his brothers in arms. A creeper came out of no-where and blew up a couple of meters in front of Dalsirus, Dalsirus was wounded, but he noticed some sunlight shining on his body, he looked up to notice that the creeper had blown up a small hole in the cave entrance, but he kept shooting the zombies as that was the only thing he could do. After hours of fighting the mercenaries came and help Dalsirus to his feet and they began to dig thier wat to freedom. They finally had a hole big enough for them and they exited the cave. When they came out they saw many strange men waiting outside with handcuffs and chains. Dalsirus noticed that the hooded man was with all the other stange men. Dalsirus and the last of the mercenaries were shipped to a place know as Asulon, his story will unfold from there.

2 appearance: He wears black and grey main clothes and for a trim he has shades of green, for more detail there will be a photo at the bottom of this app

3 personality: My elf is bright and happy as he is ready to explore this new land

4 Age: 26

Your characters ambitions: to find guidance in Asulon and find a place where he belongs

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?: My character would jump out from the bush, I tell the bandits that if they do not back away they would taste me blade! (if the bandits don’t back off I would attack and help my brother elf) If I won I would tent to the elf and see what had happened to create this conflict.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?: Good day, I would like to purchase some bread, how much coin will that be?

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information:

thank you for looking at my app

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

Dark blue text is impossible to read.

In-Character and Ou-Of-Character are titles, not questions.

Work on your grammar, punctuation and presentation (especially spacing).

Expand on roleplaying and metagaming.

Biography is cliche (dead parents, sole survivor of village, surviving in wilds, etc.).

There are no creepers in Asulon.

Unless your character is very stupid, waltzing right up to a group of hooded people and asking to join is very unrealistic.

Your biography doesn't explore your character's childhood or personality.

The entire encounter with the cave is confusing and unjustified.

First open reponse question needs a lot more information, such as details of combat and dialogue.

Second open reponse question needs a lot more than one line.

No glowy red eyes.

[Rhisereld 317]

Moved to Denied Forum