Application Jorn_M69

[jorn_m69 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:jorn_m69

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:gmt+1 belguim

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yea i can speak english very good

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:i am an boy that plays minecraft allot i like to be an devil >:D i am friendly and sometimes a angry person really SOMETIMES

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:uuhm allot maybe uuhm 3-4 hours a day

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:i like it rp servers are the best servers at minecraft i know allot of roleplaying that if you grab someone you need to say that with *i grabbed yoker* like that,...

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.powergaming is saying something like this:

jon:hey whatcha doing.

me:nothing

jon:GIVE ME YOUR MONEY NOW

me:no

jon: grabs me and hits me with a stone brick*

so powergaming means things you do without opening a door in a car,....

and metagaming is knowing things what you should not know in rp like:

jon:hello eric can you say the way to the trainstation

eric:how do you know my name?

jon:look up your name is above you.

What do you expect this server will be like?:a big big big epic server with allot of ppl and epic skins of ppl and a nice friendly community

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on allot of rp servers but i left them because they where boring but this server is awesome with weddings and all that things...

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes i did the rules are clear for me i will follow them.

How did you hear about us?:my brother yoker69 said this server was awesome and i watched allot of vids about this server

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? i didn't do but if i am accepted to the server i will vote almost everyday

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:jorn_m69

In-Character:

Character Name:janiktos

What is your Race?:red wood elf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

janiktos is an elf who lived in elandriel and lived with his family and his elven brother yoker in a big tree house they lived good until some orcs came and burned down allot of house one of them was mine house and the tree fell down my brother and i lived but my father and mother died we lived on the streets and we where asking allot of ppl to live with them but they all denied our request my brother founded a house but i didn't i was all alone i was always jumping from tree to tree until some guards came and saw me and putted me in jail 8 years later i was 19 years old i was released from jail i was so happy and my brother said i could live with him i came and lived with him i was training everyday my archery skills until some undead ghost ppl came and i saw them in my brothers house they left and they stole everything in our house i tried to shoot them but i always mist i came back to our house and i was my brother dead on the ground i was crying allot and i wanted revenge i was going to the fort of the undeads and i was trying to get in but i failed they always kicked me out of it then i gave up i lived my life further untill now i am now 26 years old and i gonna try soon again to kill that bastards.

Your characters ambitions:a friendly and sometimes an angry elf who wants revenge for the dead of his family.hes likes to sneak at ppl and shoot an arrow in the eye xD

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?help the elf and kill the bandits or trying to let them flee

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

"i want some cooked pork and a chicken and some steak and maybe 20 slices of melon pls" shop owner says "that 25 gold bars pls" i give the gold bars and say " there you go"

A screenshot of your skin:a elf with big elf ears red hair and a sort of suit in red with a bow and arrows at the back.

Other Information: a sneaky and good unarmed person who can shoot arrows right in your eye and can kill you in seconds with a sword i am really skilled in killing ppl and farming and mining :D

[Danny 2232]

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I'm sorry, but your application for Lord of the Craft has been...

Notes for applicant:

I knew I was denying this from the moment I opened it...

• There isn't such a thing as red wood elves.
• Janiktos isn't a roleplay name.
• Your biography is messy and undetailed. Put more effort into it.
• The open response questions are not nearly detailed enough, what would your character do, say and think?
• What you've put for ambitions, isn't ambitions...
• The skin must be a screenshot.
• "a sneaky and good unarmed person who can shoot arrows right in your eye and can kill you in seconds with a sword" is powergaming. You can't do that.

Please note: Whilst you may be angry or irritated at this denial, you need to understand that as a member of the Application Team it is my job to ensure we only have people who made great applications on the server. After you fix the issues that I've detailed in your application, it will probably be accepted.

Where can I get help to fix these errors?

It really depends on what you need – you are not allowed to have anyone else write part of your application for you. As the Application Team we're here to not only accept and deny your applications, but it's our job to give you help for fixing them. We'll help you as much as we can, but we will never write a bit of your application, no matter how much you ask!

The best way to get help, is to contact the Application Team member who denied you, (in this case, myself; Danny). You can contact me either here on the forums, via a PM – or you can also find me on TeamSpeak most of the time, either in the “Application Team” channel or in one of the private channels. Feel free to poke me, or send me a message for any help, and I'll try my best to help you!

I'd also suggest that you do some reading up, depending on why you were denied, as there's some good help out there, already written for anyone who needs it!

The WikiYou provides almost every scratch of lore that we have, there's people dedicated to expanding on it, and making it as detailed as possible. It's possibly the best place to find lore on the website, although you can also find quite a bit in this forum section.

You should also read the various posts that have been made by GM's and Application Team members to help with your applications, and believe me, there are many. The most useful is the “Application Team's Advice” thread. Which can be found

right here.

Can I re-apply?

Of course you can! Often people post as many as 3 applications before they're accepted! Just make sure, that you wait until after 2 hours before you re-apply or your application will be denied. We have the 2 hour wait system to keep the Application Submissions forum tidy, and to ensure that the application team aren't overwhelmed by applicants posting a new application every five minutes.

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[Daniel_J 23]

Moved to Denied Forum