Kristar's 2Nd App

[Kristar 2]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:Castvoid

How old are you?:14 ill be 15 at this june :)

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:I live in Finland

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Well i think i speak good english but my grammar is medium or something :S

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im an medival fan so i choosed minecraft and i love rping in servers cause then i feel like im really in the game :)

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Well my lessons end usually at 15.00 soo maybe 7 hours a day and 20 hours at the weekends

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:acting the part you have given/choosen

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:Well sometime me and my friends do rp and i have watched a lot of lord of the craft videos made by candel :S if that works :S

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Using the player knowledge to help the character knowledge

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:*sigh* Powergaming - In one word... Nolife?

What do you expect this server will be like?:Fun, lots of roleplay,friends,wars and experience

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:ah some estonian servers but i quited cause got bored and started looking rp servers

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes!

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes!

How did you hear about us?:Candel the guy who made yt videos about it ,candel

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:No i havent ...But at 9 march i will ! Cause ill get premium then!

In-Character:

Character Name:Castvoid

What Race are you?:Human!

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Okey umm! Hes name is Castvoid! Called as the Ranger of the north.When arnor fell the dunedains became the rangers of the north

in Evendim.He was blessed with long life.Atm when he made to asulon he was 70years old and still young the dunedains who are blessed with long life live up to 240-250 years!He and some other dunedains were patroling the

northern porders till the orcs attacked them so the patrol falled back ,but Castvoid stayd there , injured

The orcs took him as a Trophee and went back do the camp, some hours later the orcs were attcked by the elves, elves took castvoid to their care and heald him , Castvoid decided to stay with the elves for a little longer, the elves teached

him better bow and sword fighting!But Castvoid wanted an adventures, So he traveled back to asulon to find a King to serve for his life? (He is brave,loyal,Kind,and helpful, Dunedains are humas still but blessed with longer life :) i made the story up but got the idea from lotr movies :)) (dose this fit?)

What is your Character's ambitions?:To seek glory and new adventure!

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Bow fighting

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):Umm i got a default skin atm :S but ill get premium at 9 march But please dont rejeckt this cause of that

Other Information about your Character:He is a good man and brave!

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?He runs upon thous armed man , pulls out his sword ! pushing them away! Taking hes formation and warns them not to touch him again and if they will hed cut their throats!

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Hed wount say anything! Hed keep walking to his destination

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Id refuse! Cause gold isnt that good!And irons i dont need :)

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?Greetings! Ill offer gold do thous who give me the finest beef? :D

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information? Hed say! I offer my sword for this village safety! Till my task is done! :)

[Danny 2232]

Hello mate!

I'm sorry to have to let you know I have no choice but to deny your application. Why? Well, there's a few reasons, and I'll try and explain as well as I can below. If you need further help, then popping me a PM is alway good. I'll try my best to help!

So - onto why you were denied.

Well, various reasons, however the first major problem was the definition of roleplaying. You've not really given much of a unique answer, have you? It doesn't tell me what roleplaying actually means to you, yourself. Please try and elaborate for next time.

After that, I got onto your powergaming and metagaming parts. Whilst the metagaming definition is technically correct, it's pretty vague, if you know what I mean. Provide an example maybe? And powergaming - you didn't even provde a proper definition. Google 'powergaming in a roleplay sense' and you'll have your answer - just make sure you make it your own words. :)

I then proceeded onto your biography where I noticed a common, but major problem. Lord of the Craft is not Lord of the Rings. Arnor, Rangers of the North and Dundaneans don't exist! You also can't really be blessed with long life, so your life span is the same as any normal human. Your biography also doesn't tell me what I would like to know. I need to know your chracters appearance, personality, the way he behaves.

You really need a roleplay skin. You can't join with the default skin, infact, you can't really join at all until you're premium!

In the first open response question, you don't really describe much. You only say that he pushes them back, then threatens to cut their throats? What happens after that? What does he smell, feel, think?

The other questions are also lacking in detail. Describe them as if you were writing a story, in a way.

Finally - Check your grammar, and run your application through a spell checker for next time, it'll help your chances of acceptance.

I also suggest not reapplying until you get premium. 1) It'll give you more time to work on your app. 2) Even if you are accepted, you can't play with a non-premiums account.

Thank you for applying! Remember you need to wait 24 hours before posting a new application, or it will be instantly denied.

Fair Winds!

~Danny

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