Seannie22's Second Application

[seannie 7443]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: seannie22

How old are you?: I am 15 years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: PST/ British Columbia, Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have an ok English.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm nice to people that are nice and I don't do "omg i lost all my diamond to a lag" stuff. I like Minecraft a lot. I play a lot of role playing games but that list is later on. I don't boast/brag or arrogant .

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: In the week maybe 1 hour depending how much stuff I have to do and in the week end maybe 3-4 on Saturday and Sunday.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role playing means to me that you usually start with nothing you got to do quest/missions talk people be a evil or saint like character got to level up different ability.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I played mostly role playing like the mass effect series, oblivion, Mount and Blade, I dont really play FPS i find them boring I like runing around and finding secret stuff.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: this". Metagaming is when you take information you have learn in an out-of-character way, e.g. TeamSpeak, the Forums, or Real-Life, and using it in-character. A prime example of this is, if I was in a TeamSpeak channel and heard someone say the co-ordinates to their house, and I went and used them co-ordinates to find them - I'd be metagaming. It can also be when you see a "nametag" above someones head, and call them by that name - as well as calling someone by their roleplay name, if you've never spoken to them in-character.This is from the What you should do in a application I had problem making it into my own words so I hope this will not damage my chance to get in the server.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Is doing something and not letting the other person or thing react at all.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Fun mostly from what I seen from the trailers buiding and races the races look really cool in the lore and the buildings LOOK amazing grats on the person who ever built them

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on servers but I don't really eave them but the greifed spawns that I will leave.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I do

How did you hear about us?: Minecraft server.org

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Yes this is my 2 one the link is ======>http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/49405-seannie22s-application/

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/): No I haven't I went to the Minecraft forums but it says to go back here.

In-Character:

Character Name: Sean

What Race are you?: Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): No

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Sean was born in a secluded town in Asulon beside the ocean. His dad the one of the few town guard that protected this village. Sean's mom died at child birth so Sean did not know much from his mom only his dad talk about her. Sean's dad named Martin was named after his dad Martin and martins dad was named Martin and so on. So Martin would wake Sean up every day to teach him some of the Lore of Asulon and talked about the ancient race. Sean was really interested in this ancient races called Aenguls and their followers Daemon and how they are rarely seen and hoped one day he will see them. Martin talk about the other races and how he had dwarves and elves friends across the vast forest that secluded the little town. Martin would teach Sean sword skills where to strike on a mans bodie. Sean only being 10 at the time wasn't build up to be a warrior all ready so he trained and so on. Nine years later the town has being prospering enough for people to actually find it but with more people came bandits. The bandits underestimated the guards strength at the time but over a few week the bandits came with diamond swords iron armor. I counted the bandits while I was jumping on roofs and saw over 20 bandits as the town guards charged the bandits suddenly Sean hears screaming behind him and sees roof on fire people getting killed on the streets and also saw 4 ships that have landed. Sean was panicking and going to his house but then everything goes black.

Sean was struck by an arrow to the chest and fell down the roofs then was captured since he still showed signs of life. Sean was brought back to their camp. Their was no human in the camp the bandits were all Orcs, Elves, and Dwarves. The bandit leader never telling me his name said "your pretty strong to survive that shot" Sean still dazed only nodded. So over time the bandits keep him prisoner until they ran into a human trap and arrows came from everywhere Sean instinct was to duck and that saved him. Then a patrol from the Nation Hanseti found him. Sean was saved from the bandits and brought back to a city called Konigsberg, their the guards said the bandits were are group marauding all the nation's villages, the guard said they didn't need help so Sean went to a city that his dad always talked about the "Sanctuary of the Cloud Temple" but Sean always said that he will go back to Konigsberg and help out the town.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To execute all bandits and to be recognized as a fair nice person.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Sean's favorited tool is his sword that is razor sharp forged from the towns anvil.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Sean is skilled at finishing an order whether its a merchant job or clearing the roads from bandits and a very good swords man.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/123404/hardcore-survivor/

Other Information about your Character: Sean loves to learn about the ancient races.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? I call the too warrior and said "You two stop it" the warrior look around and saw them slowly walking towards me. One of them punches me with lightning speed while the other pick me up and held me there. While I was getting punched by the warriors the Halfling came and knock the warrior punching me unconscious while I elbowed the warrior holding me as I turned around the warrior punch me right on the nose, as I stumble backward the halfling jumped on the warrior back but the warrior just threw the Halfling to the ground but then I drove my sword in the warrior's guts since he didn't expected me. As I check on the Halfling the other warrior came and bashed my head on the ground. I think it was hours later until I regained my senses apparently I was dumped into a ditch beside the road as I got up I found one of the warrior dead from me and the halfling laying in a pool of his own blood. I then walked to Cloud Temple and reported what happened on the road.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? The man is really just a merchant selling goods I say "hello" and inspect his goods but has I see his goods a thief comes from behind and tries to pick pocket the merchant that when I picked up my shoe and threw it at the thief who quickly ran away. The merchant glad that you saved some of his money allows you to take one free thing from the stall.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: You look around and not far off there is a fire so you walked toward the fire and see 3 people all dressed in iron so I ask "what are you doing here" one of them reply "there is a secret passage in the house and we are waiting for a man to come back since we saw sign of life there. A man does come back and greets the group happily saying he hasn't seen people for long time he feeds you dinner and I leave to find more treasures.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? I ask for food but they say all their food was stolen by some thing so you decide to investigate the trading group of five follow my foot step deeper into the forest until I found a cave entrance. I soon found the cave was a den for wolves so I got ready and went in with the group. The cave was huge the ceiling was tall and it stretches really far. One person in the group points out there supplies at the end of the room which had a pack of wolves as I walked towards the wolves more came on my side and dragged of one of the men has two of the men followed their friend getting dragged off two stayed with me and attack the main part of the room one of the men got his throat ripped by a wolves while the other was killing wolves and I ran at the pack leader a large grew wolve the wolve jump at me and bit my arm and was tugging at it while I drove a sword in the wolve head. The wolve still had his jaw locked on my arm was hard to move around so I saw the two man come back with a lifeless body trying to help their companion fighting more wolves. Now some wolves saw me vulnerable so I had 3 wolve circle me until they all got shot by arrows. The group was done fighting and got the wolves pack loot while I got my arm tied to my chest. I then traveled with them to a town.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I said I would gladly help them but my arm is healing so I couldn't help them but I showed a couple guards sword strikes from my dad then I saw the battle. The bandits saw the town guards and attacked them after a while the bandits retreated from the battle and the towns guard won the battle.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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You have been Denied. This application presents many mistakes or errors over the ones pointed out by Ursolon, maybe because you added things.

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These were the main points which were bad or not so good of your application:

~Use the right format! Don't delete the things between square brackets! They make the application pretty! Not grey and bland like this one...

~Your character is too perfect (talents, traits, and other...) and too powerfull

~Your definition of Role-Play doesn't demonstrate your knowledge on the topic, and for the record RPG is not RP, completely different.

~Your English is pretty bad, you are misspelling something each five words... Its not easy to understand what you mean. Please check your spelling and grammar. It shows your lack of effort to have so many mistakes.

~Your Meta-Gaming definition is wrong, why don't you look around on the forums or on Team Speak to find out its real meaning.

~Your biography needs to be worked on, be original, and use correct Lore (the destruction of Aegis and travel to Asulon), be creative and you need to explain your appearance and attitude and what it says in the question.

~Plagiarism isn't allowed whatsoever, even if you can't put something into your own words. This could be the only reason I deny your for.

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Once you fix these things you can re-apply but only 24 hours after your latest application. Use your time well and PM me if you have any questions.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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