Toxiclily's 2Nd Submission

[ToxicLily 8]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: ToxicLily

How old are you?: 20

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada/Toronto

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Very good grip. At times I will make some common mistakes but I tend to think before I type.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm a fun, outgoing women, who loves to build and have fun in a great community. I'm currently taking a year off school to work and save up cash. On my spare time I play many different games hang out with friends and am an artist for hire. ;P

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: After work, and on days off. Maybe 10 hours a week at best.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is when a person or more then one person play as a character they have created. They play it out as if they were living and acting as this person in their time period and their strengths and weaknesses.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Many experiences. I've role-played in and out of minecraft, and have tried other minecraft roleplaying servers. I was told this was the best one of all though, and I'd love to try it out. :)

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: When you know more then your character does. You are aware of things. Lets say you know out of character that a man is going to attack you in the middle of the night and rob you of your goods but in game your character hasn't been warned. Acting on this information you haven't been given is Meta-Gaming.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Power gaming in simplest forms is when a player makes role playing unfair/fun for other players. By Overpowering his/her character and letting them have an unfair advantage. They give their characters no kyptonite and allow them to dodge and foresee attacks making things very unrealistic.

Ex. *You are suddenly attacked by 4 mages. Taking you by surprise they ignite the ground around you in flames making it hard to escape*

Player: *See's the mages unable to be taken off guard and kills one before they can ignite the ground*

*The mages take a moment to cast a cage spell to trap the player*

Player: *uses his shield to block the magic and kills all the mages*

What do you expect this server will be like?: I was told amazing things from my friend. I'm enthralled to see your server and its community. I've been told you have an amazing intense role play, and I'm excited to see that for myself :D

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on a couple of role-play servers. I left them due to boredom, even though I enjoyed the community and liked the builds. They barely enforced the role-play so allot of the time there was nothing to do but just none stop building. Which is fun! but I joined to role-play :/

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I do. If everyone follows the rules, it makes the server a whole lot more fun :3

How did you hear about us? Did someone refer you?: Yeah my friend from work :) she plays on this server Her username is Peachi3xx or Kyra du Mont in game.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Here is my first attempt: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/53994-toxiclilys-submission/ I was slightly confused at what was expected of me during the response questions. But i have looked it over and i think i fixed up everything :)

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

In-Character:

Character Name: Lily Tîwele

What Race are you?: Elven

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Wood Elf.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Born under the tall trees of Morbihan, Lily Tîwele came into the world curious and wise. Her hair bared the color of sunset red and her eyes a gentle olive green. She grew among elders of her people, learning the ways of the wind and the trees. With her bare feet, she climbed the bark of their tree top homes gazing upon the land before her. She was curious, and curiosity the elders would say usually leads to trouble. But trouble was something Lily had dealt with before.

At the age of 17 she slipped outside the protection of her people and had stumbled upon a human sitting atop one of the trees. Unaware that she was watching him, he peered through a long glass telescope over at the rolling hills. After a whiles wait she introduced herself not fearful that this man would ever harm her. Naive; is what some would call Lily. As she let the man so easily into her heart she also let him into her village. And in doing so, would lead to her banishment.

For you see, this man was a thief among trades. And Morbihan had been just another one of his many targets. For in the towns heart was a book the elfs so cherished. Throughout their ancestors they had protected it. And due to Lily's naive kindness the thief slipped the book from under their noses.

Outraged, Lily was then banned from Morbihan, never to return. Hungry and lonely she slipped into the woods with only her bow in hand. Years had passed and Lily's naive trust in people never seemed to vanish. But when crossed with a human, she is reminded of her encounter with that human thief. In doing so humans disgust her. Her years of living alone have made her stubborn yet cunning. Aware of what good herbs to eat and what trees are good to climb. Seeking out a village to settle down she constantly travels the lands for a home. She is naive as always and trusts people too quickly, making her easy to back stab.

What is your Character's ambitions?: Unable to find a place to call her own. She longs for a bed to lay her head and a friend to aid her. Under her cruel stubborn personality all she yearns for is a companion.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

She always has a bow at hand making it her best and most deadly of weapons. When she is forging for supplies she keeps to wooden or stone tools. Iron and diamond find themselves to be to much of a hassle to find and wield for her as they are heavy.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Lily is a skilled adventurer. When it comes to venturing into the great outdoors she has no equal. Climbing, and hiking through the great unknown and navigating through the many lands. She is a skilled adventurer, seeking to add another trail to her story.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): http://i50.tinypic.com/9kcj0i.png

Other Information about your Character: She is stubborn, and cold towards humans. She speaks well in human tongue, but at times an elven word or two will slip in during her sentences.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

"Hey!" *jumps out from her hidden spot within the shadows of the trees* " Two on one doesn't seem very fair" *Readies her bow* "How about two on two?" *grins*

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Hello." *stares at his wares with little interest* *gives him a polite smile before starting a brisk walk away. Hating the idea of having to small talk with a human.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

*attempts to lift the iron with little luck* "Theses are too heavy..." *Mutters to herself* "What would i do with this junk anyway?" *turns to the cabinets hoping to find a scrap of bread* *leaves the iron and gold sword behind*

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

"Vedui'((Greetings))"*Bows*"...I am Lily. I have been traveling for some time now, with little luck in the last days hunt. Might you spare some food?" *reaches in her pocket pulling out some coins* "I have these...." *shakes them in her hand with little interest in human coin*

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

"Bandits..." *hisses the word around her tongue in disgust* *scoffs* "Usually...i wouldn't dare help you....'humans'...but there's one thing we seem to share in common it seems" *Smiles* "We both hate bandits....Count me in!"

[Admiral_Ackbarf 67]

Denied

You honestly are almost there but...

You're ORQs are way too short and still contain a little power-gaming to them. For the first ORQ you answered

"Hey!" *jumps out from her hidden spot within the shadows of the trees* " Two on one doesn't seem very fair" *Readies her bow* "How about two on two?" *grins*

I would really like to hear more about what your character does next. Fix all of these within your ORQs. Good luck! :)

P.S. Feel free to PM me with any questions you may have.

[Admiral_Ackbarf 67]

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