2Nd Time, Crossed Fingers

[sullgray 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

sullgray

How old are you?:

I am 14 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Canada, Atlantic

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I might miss a comma or miss spell a word once and a while. Also I often times forger a capital letter.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I love to play minecraft and pretty much all sports! I also love to hang out with my friends. I love to joke around!

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I estamate I will be on this server about 10 hours a week. It depends if it is raining!

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Role-playing means to take on the role of another character. To be the character. To experience the role of another character.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I role-play almost everyday! Often times with my brother! He is really in to "Star Wars". And I end up being OB1 Kenobi.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is taking the knowlege of outside the game and using it to your advantage in the game.

example: searching "lord of the craft" on youtube. Getting info from there and using it for your advantage.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-Emoting is to force an action on another player. Doing something to the other player without the other player to have time to respond and say "NO". It is a quick act.

I promise, I will not do any power-emoting.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think that this server will be the best roleplay server ever! I have been looking for something like this, NOW I FOUND IT! I also know that there is a great community!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on many servers just to find something like this! I left them because they were not what I was looking for. I also played on my friends servers, but there were way too many griefers!

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have read, understood and agreed to the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I promise to abide by all the rules. If I break 1 I want to be reminded by getting punishment.

How did you hear about us?:

I saw a youtube video on lord of the craft. I reshearched it to see if it was actually what I was looking for!

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Heres the link: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/60401-application/

In-Character:

Character Name:

First: Findecano

Last: Eluch

I got it from an elf name generator! :D

http://www.chriswetherell.com/elf/index.php (get your own)

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

I am an Elf.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

My subrace is a Wood Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Findecano is a 83 year old boy Wood Elf. Findecano usially wears green clothes because he says that green is his favorite color. He has blue eyes and has average sized ears (for an elf). You can often see him talking to the neibors and practicing bow and arrow. Sometimes you just find him laying is the grass by the animals, he has some connection with the animals! Findecano is very curious and cautious. He is also aware of how others feel. He has a great sence of humor!

When Findecano was a baby his parents were great friends with the Dwarfs. That was hard on him. His parents kept on eating meat and jumping and sprinting for more speed. Findecano knew that those things were not allowed for an Elf. Findecano had really messed up parents. His parents ended up dieing because of too much colesterol in their diet.

On Findecano's 14th birthday, he went on a small walk (cause he could barely walk) he was in luck to find a Dwarf versus Orc battle! He says that was the scariest thing he ever saw. Findecano saw an Orc in a tree with a bow and arrow. Thats where he got his passion of archery!

What are your Character's ambitions?:

Findecano wants to make an Elf city and be the richest Elf around! He also wants to be aa social Elf and promote Justice!

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Findecano's favorite weapon is a bow and arrow. He is wicked with them! And sometimes he also likes to use an axe.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Findecano's best talent is to be an archer! He is also really good with people skills.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Shot at 2012-06-26

Other Information about your Character:

Findecano wants to add thats he is unemployed!

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Findecano would kill the robbers and might aid the halfling! Findecano gets bullied because of his soft personnality.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Findecano would ask do you have any...

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Findecano would open the chest and may add some junk to the chest.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Findecano would say "I... am... starving. Food, I need food. Can I have some bread."

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Anything for a reward!

Anything else you would like to say?:

I was told to...

You definitions are all wrong...You need to expand on them. And this is 'Power-Emoting' not 'Power Emotion'

Your MC name is generally not a very good RP name...But your's may do. I don't particularly like it, and would change it if I were you.

Your biography would be better if it was typed in the third person. And 14 years of age is VERY young for an elf...You would hardly be able to walk. Also, you need to implement some lore into your biography.

You can read up on server lore here:

http://www.lordofthe...?wakka=HomePage

http://www.lordofthe...net/?page_id=10

You need to expand on all of your ORQs. They contain no detail at all... And haflings are not 'its' they are a sub-race of humans. Similar to hobits. They are not pets >.>

[ShadowoKing 86]

Denied

-All need to do is adjust your bio abit, how he got to Asulon. Do not say was born there, not on land that long.

-Still your answers for ORQ are too short and lack of detail. Add more actions for your character, add to your answers actions and movements to lead the end. Not too long but to show your roleplay.

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

Moved to Denied Forum