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[RedMage 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Devinator19

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA Eastern time/Michigan

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: yes I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: yes some In a LARP/ and VideoGames

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: yes I agree with the rules

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Internet search: Roleplaying

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/70982-redmage-app-form/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: I Will right after this.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Acting in a Role with real emotions and staying in character.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: To use a Skill/Info learned from real life and using it in a game.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Saying what you are doing like "RedMage winked at the fine maiden"

In-Character Details

Character Name: RedMage

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Im 6ft,2in at 22 years old, I have Brown hair, and a very distinctive face, Brown eyes, and I wear a brown and grey robe with a Red Dagger on my Right legging. I have No family Now. I moved out when I was 13 and lived with my Grandpa he taught me everything from Swinging a Sword to Launching an Arrow. He died when I turned 19. I went to live on my own taking on Magic, I was pretty good too, But I gave up on It. Then when I got a Bow and Arrow That was in my Grandfathers will. I used that arrow To kill animals, Kill bandits, on dragons all sorts of things. I realized I had a problem with killing so I stop didn't use it and will only use it if its an emergency.

What are your characters ambitions?: Family,Making a Living

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No I explained myself well I presume.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I would help the Dwarf make enough money for him to get his life started. I would do this by selling the Items myself then giving him the Money and see if theres a job for him elsewhere where people accept Dwarves.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I would try to calm things down using word using reverse psychology that my Grandfather taught me I would use this because Orcs believe to pick on a smaller race. So I would make him believe the dwarf was the bigger person mentally.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I would pick up the Coins and give every Coin back and use my own Coins to buy the Elder a new cane and new Bag for his coins and If he spilled a lot of coins I would ask him If he wanted a Bank to keep his coins in then I would walk with him until he can sit or relax.

[Lita 677]

• Your powergaming definition is still wrong, and your metagaming definition is very general.
• Your bio and ORQs are weak at best.
• Your second ORQ is simply nonsensical. You convinced the Orc that the Dwarf was physically larger? The logic in this I fail to see. And if you convinced the Orc that the Dwarf was metaphorically larger, he'd probably just slaughter the Dwarf anyway.
• It is powergaming to have learned magic (big no-no here, magic cannot be used without an M-App), swordsmanship, and archery.
• Your bio did not meet the two paragraph minimum.
• Your grammar is poor, and makes reading the application tiresome.

Remember to wait (24) hours before reapplying.

[Lita 677]

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