Emilia's application

[Emilia 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Emzz12

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: The Netherlands, GMT +1

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I've been on a couple of RP servers

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes I've read them, yes I agree with them

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Google. I was searching for 'Serious minecraft RP server'

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: This is my first app.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is that you act like your caracter.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Metagaming is using OOC information IC, like that you know somebody's name by looking at the chat.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: That you're over-powered, like that you can control what other players do.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Emilia Liming

Character Race: (wood) Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: When Emilia was around 7 years old, she lived in a small poor town in the south with her parents, Violet and Alexander, and her

brother, Chris. Even though the town was poor, she liked it there. She helped the farmer with

farming, which she really enjoyed. She was kind to others, and always saw the best in

everything. Her father taught her brother, Chris, how to use a bow so he could hunt for

flesh and leather. Emi wanted to learn how to use the bow as well, but her father did not

allow her to. He thought that it was 'too dangerous for a 7 year old girl'.

Luckily, her brother agreed to teach her how to use a bow secretely.

One day, Chris took Emilia with him while he was going to hunt some animals. It hasn't

rained for a couple of weeks, and it was really hot. A forest fire began. When Emilia and

Chris noticed the forest fire they immidiatly started running. But Emilia was panicking that

much that she lost Chris. She wanted to search him but the knew that she won't survive if

she did. She decided to keep running, not knowing what direction. She ran, and ran..

Emilia has been travelling on her own ever since that happened. She thinks of the forest

fire every day. She remembers fire, fire everywhere. she was running, running as hard as she could.

But after a few years she understood that being sad about it wasn't going to change

anything. She just had to accept that she had to continue on her own. Emilia is

still trying to see the best in everything, but it's much harder than it used to be.

Right now, Emilia is 19 years old. Her appearance haven't changed much since her childhood.

Still the same, white, long hair, pale skin and blue sparkling eyes.

What are your characters ambitions?: She wants to figure out if her brother and parents are still alive, or if they died because of the fire. She also hopes that she finds her old town back someday

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=slgnpx&s=6

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Not really

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I looked at the poor dwarf. I couldn't just walk by. I asked him to show me his wares so I could buy something. I picked something which I could afford. It looked like an old bracelet. I gave him the money for the bracelet and walked along.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I carefully watched at the dwarf and the orcs from a small distance. I couldn't stay here for much longer. I had to do something! But I wasn't strong enough, I wasn't strong at all. I looked around me. There wasn't anyone around to help. Suddenly I got an idea. I grabbed my bow, which I carry around on my back. I might now be strong, but I'm a quick runner.. I shoot an arrow right above one of the orcs their heads, hopeing that they'll turn around and chase me and leave the poor dwarf alone.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I kneeled down next to the man and started to collect his coins. I asked him if he was okay. I helped the man up and handed him his coins. I asked him if he needed help to get home, since his walking stick was broken.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Add a Power-Emoting example of your own creation.

It's highly unrealistic that a seven-year-old Elf could take care of herself for twelve years. Even at nineteen she's only just leaving childhood by the Elven standards. Please add some server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Wood Elves have brown skin, ranging from dark to light.

All Open Response Questions need to be expanded. They should read as small stories with dialogue and action.

A really good first attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Volutional 935]

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