The Impoverished Noble

[Thu'um 530]

Written by Vincent Divine - Unknown Year ~ Asulon

The Impoverished Noble

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The Impoverished Noble,

Oh boy have they lied,

Covering up Genocide.

Living in Squalor,

Just give them a Holler.

Their people are dead,

They're so misled.

The Impoverished Noble,

They embrace death,

They're out of breath.

They've tossed their life down the drain,

Now all they feel is a bunch of pain.

Give up now,

Or we'll show you how.

The Impoverished Noble,

Once revered,

Now they're feared.

The Impoverished Noble... shutting the door on the poor.

[IrishPerson 693]

Quite good for you first one.

[Thu'um 530]

Quite good for you first one.

Thanks, it was pretty difficult to come up with the word choices and rhyming.

[Shadeleaf 1022]

*golf clap

[Slic3man 484]

Looks like we have a more mature Doctor Seuss. Still a rather nice read, keep on going if you enjoy it yourself. :D

[SDJFDSJNFDSLKJVNDFBN 315]

Very nice. I enjoyed it, friend.

[Lynesse {Celia/Jazzy} 398]

Reminds me a lot of Viva la Vida by Coldplay!

Great job on the poem, it's a good read!

[Thu'um 530]

Thank You for all of the kind responses! It inspires me to right more, also I enjoy writing. This greatly influences my character.

[Knox213 10]

Moved to the Archive. It shall be sorted into the appropriate category shortly.