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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: graphic18

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Central/Canada

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes, I have a good grip on English grammar and the English language at all times try to keep my spelling perfect, and use excellent grammar. I strive to keep all my sentences making perfect or close to it sense.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Yes, I have had previous experience in roleplaying this is not my first minecraft server where I have used roleplaying. I thoroughly enjoy roleplaying with others.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes, I have read the rules of the server and have understood them and agreed to them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

I heard of Lord of the Craft on Planet Minecraft as I was searching for servers. This server immediately caught my attention and I started reading the lore, and histories. I also took the time to read lots of forum articles.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:This is my first application.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! : Yes I have posted it on the Forums.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

Roleplaying is when you play the part of a character in a game and you don’t talk about your life and other personal IRL stuff with others. In roleplay you take on the identity of another person and you play their character.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

Meta-gaming means mixing the IC information with OOC information, so for example if I would be in roleplay situation and I would suddenly start talking about my real life, that would be Meta-gaming.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

Power-emoting is the act of never dying, having lots of power and not being able to be hurt by others. Power-emoting is basically a form of cheating as it gives you an unfair illegal advantage over other players

In-Character Details

Character Name:Har’vok

Character Race: dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Har’vok was dropped by father as he and his mother were chased by the pursuing humans. Har’vok was just 7 when he fell. Lying in the shadows breathless as he waited for the humans to pass. When they were gone he ventured out from his hiding place.

Har’vok then went to work using the skills his father had taught him. He made him self a wooden home, fashioning himself a bow. Lacking the materials to mine great ores Har’vok improved his archery skills using them to kill prey to get food. He killed cows to fashion himself leather armor. Surviving for 13 years Har’vok finally decided to venture away from the wooden home that he had lived in for the past 13 years. Coming upon a road he followed it until he found the dwarven mountains. Venturing in to them he found the vast cavern. Finding his fellow dwarves Har’vok rejoiced. He immediately ask about his mother and father only to be burdened by the knowledge that they had die in the human raid. Har’vok went on mining in the deep caverns of the mountain abode. Happy Har’vok decided to stay there and live among his fellow dwarves.

What are your characters ambitions?:

Har’vok wants to live life free, he also dreams of becoming a great warrior, a great miner, and a great builder. He aspires to serve his nation to the best of his ability.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

 

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Har’vok is a kind dwarf who loves to build, mine, and create, but when his friends, and nation is threatened a fire awakens within him.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Har’vok approaches the shopkeeper asking what his wares are. He turns showing me a few broken damaged swords, a dejected expression on his face. Pitying the dwarf I ask his price “10 minas sir” he answers a hopeful expression on his face. I smile “sold,” I say, “we dwarves look after one another.”

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Har’vok runs up to them asking them why they quarrel so. The Orc responds saying that the dwarf had stolen an ancient book that had been given to him by his great great grandmother. Turning the dwarf I ask him his side of the story. He answers me saying, “lies, lies this Orc knows nothing he was trying to steal from me!” “Is this true?” I ask the Orc. “What, of course it isn’t this insult to the dwarven race is just trying to escape trouble,” he responded. “No one, no one insults a fellow dwarf and gets away with this!” I say, “lets us dispose of this Orc and continue on our way my friend,” I say to the dwarf. “Agreed,” he answers. With two quick efficient strokes of our swords we cut off his head and impale his heart.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick, looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?:Har’vok leans down swiftly plucking the coins from the ground, then handing them to the old man. Asking him if there is any other assistance he may require. Then Har’vok asks the man if he would accept Har’vok’s gift of a new walking stick.

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Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to post your application on the Minecraft Forums, I can't find it if it's there.

Meta-Gaming definition is only partially correct, add a Power-Emoting example. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

It's unlikely a Dwarven child could survive by himself without anyone else for 13 years. Please make the bio at least two paragraphs long. Having dead parents is extremely cliché. Add some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Powergaming in the second Open Response Question, defeating the Orc so easily. Cannot kill without a Villain Application.

Expand on all ORQs. They should read as small stories with action and dialogue.

Broken formatting. Copy and paste the format exactly as it is without changing anything.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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