[Denied][D] Guyronshalev

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Out-Of-Character Details

* I Suggest Reading The Whole Thing, Since I Hate It When Whitelist Servers Just Skip To The End Then Deny Because I "Wrote Too Much", But I Worked Really Hard On This, So Please Read Everything! :)

Minecraft Account Name: guyronshalev

How old are you?: 13 (and 11 months, To be Exact!)

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Israel

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes I Do, Even If I Am Not American, I Think I Am Quite Good! :).

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I do, I played Dungeos And Dragons Online, Read And Saw All The "Lord Of The Rings" Books And Movies, And I Am Almost OBSESSED With Skyrim And God Of War (If God Of War Counts As An RPG, Which In My Opinion It Does!).

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes and I do Agree To Every Rule.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I Searched In Google: "Adventure And RPG Maps And Servers In Minecraft, And I got To This Website From The Minecraft Forums.

*I Did Not Apply For A White-listing Request Before This One, So I Will Be REALLY Glad If You Accept Me.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: A Way Of Life. Playing As A Different Character, With A Story Line, Rare Loot, Golden Coins, And Mostly, For Me Anyway, Finishing The Game :).

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Any Action In The Game That Makes The Player Use Strategy, Or Logical Thinking!

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Forcing The Result Of An action That A Character Made On-To A Different Character

In-Character Details

Character Name: Arthoronos.

Character Race: Elf.

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Once Born, Arthronos Was Brought To A Family Of Famous Archers, Since His Parents Got Murdered By Evil Forces, With Him Not Knowing Who He Has Left, Right After His Birth. At The Age Of 21, Arthornos, Arthorn For Short, Began To Travel Around The World, Looking For The Evil Forces Which Killed His Family. A Year After He Started Traveling, He Found A Phoenix, Which He Could Somehow Communicate With it. Arthronos Asked It To Join Him On His Travels, And He Will Be Somewhat Rewarded With Food. Being A Bit Silly, The Phoenix Joined Arthronos, And He Called It "DeepTear" Since The Tears Of This Phoenix Could Heal The Master And Aid Him In Battle.

With The Phoenix, Arthronos Found Evidence Of The Murderer, And Found Out-To His Surprise-That It Was His Brother, Barmindor, Which Became The Aprentice Of A NecroMancer. He Went Looking For Him, To Revenge His Parents, And Found Him Possesed By His Master, And Completely Turned Into A Mutation, Partly Elf, But Somewhat Darker, Evil-er, Mercyless Elf. Arthronos Battled Him, After He Realized There Was No Other Way To Contact Him Emotionally- Just Physically. Arthronos Got His Bow Out, And Within A Couple Of Moments, Got Hit By The Beast, Unconsciousness. After Waking Up, He Found Out That All The Memories He Had Since He Became An Adventurer-Got Deleted. After A year, He Began Traveling Again, Not knowing That his Brother Is Still Alive, And Not Knowing About His Telepathic Abilities.

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* Arthronos Is High, Skinny, And A Skilled Elf. He Has Blonde Hair, And Blue Eyes, With Nothing More Than A Bow, A sheath Of Arrows, And Clothes With Him. He Is A Very Calm Person, But Deadly When Needed Too. Mostly He Will Try To Solve Ways Without War-But Not All Is Solve-able By Good Will.

What are your characters ambitions?: Restoring His Memory To Full, Learning His Abilities, And Find The Truth About His Brother.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/mPVZJ

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I Walk Towards Him. He Says:"Aye, Would You Like To See My Wares?"

"Sure" I say. I ask Him If He Has Any Weapons, And He Says He Has Only a Dagger, A Normal Bow, And A Low Amount Of Arrows. I Say Ill Buy All the Weapons, And He Smiles, Then Says It's 71 Minas.

I Tell Him The Story Of How I Lost My Memory, And I Guess That Helps, Since He Smiles, And he Says "You Look Like a Nice Fellow, And A One I Can Trust. I Will Let You Loan These, If You Promise To Pay Me 100 Minas When You Can. When You Get That Amount, Ill Be Here, Waiting. He Chuckles And Walks Away.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I Saw The Orc Threatening The Dward, And I Couldnt Bare The Thought Of Him Being Killed, So I Got In Between Them, Asking What Happened. When I get No Response, The Orc Attacks Me With A Gigantic Wooden Club, And I Am Forced To Stab Him Until He Falls Down. The Dwarf Thanks Me Dearly, And Suggests, That If I have No-Where To Go, I can Stay At The Inn He Is Working In, And I Will Be Payed 1 Mina Per Day, But I Will Get A Room As Part Of The Work Payment. I Agree Hapilly, Knowing That If I Refuse, I Will Be Home-less.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I Walk Towards Him, Asking Him If He Needs Help Getting Up. He Says "Yes,Please" And I Help Him Out. He Thanks Me, Takes The Bag Of Minas, And Asks If I can Do Him A Favor. "Sure" I say, Then He Hands Me The Entire bag Of Minas, Saying He Will Appreciate It If I Will Go Buy Him A New Cane, And That If I Do, He Will Let Me Keep The Change. I Do What He Says, And I get A loud "Thank You" Which I think Was A Bit Too Loud, But I Just Say: "No Problem!" And Go On My Way.

* I Worked ALOT On This Application, I Hope You Will Consider That, Unlike Other Whitelist Servers Which Just Deny If I Write Alot! :) Also, I Attached This .PNG File Which Is My Skin. Please Email Me If You Think It Is Nessecary At: [email protected]

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Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

Incorrect Meta-Gaming definition. Expand on Power-Emoting definition. Add examples of both. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

There are no phoenixes in the server lore, you cannot apply as a mutated Elf or have telepathic powers. Having dead parents and seeking revenge is extremely cliché. Please add server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Skin is not very RP.

Powergaming in the second Open Response Question, killing the Orc so easily.

Broken formatting. Make sure to copy and paste the server format exactly as it is without changing anything.

Having every word capitalized makes it extremely difficult to read.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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