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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:zach211w

How old are you?:12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Pacific Timezone,North America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes,I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I have I love it alot but when I found minecraft I got addicted and thats where you come in you are both!:D!

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Certainly I do!

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My friend plays Lord Of The Craft and he says it's a GREAT server with a GREAT communtiy and I love great communiies you will rarely find them on Minecraft!

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:I will try finding the links but I can't find my application.Sorry I tried a couple months back and I can't.Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :I can't sorry :o

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is when you act as a person or thing.Example:In the real Lord Of The Rings the actors act as a Dwarf,or elve,or a king,etc.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is Out-Of-Character info that you can use in-game.Example:When my friend and I were on a raiding server until we had to go to school.At school he tells me the cords for a base.We meet there and pwn the guy at the base and raid him!

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is when you use emotians to do exactly what you want, when you want to such as: Player 1 steals Player 2's wallet and gets away safetly! as you can see Player 1 was being cheap and not letting him stop him which is bad here's the correct way to do what he did but let the other one react:Player one steal puts his hand in Player 2's pocket and looks for a wallet. So that way Player 2 can say: Player 2 turns around and swings his sword. And so on.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Maliran

Character Race:Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: When Maliran was 1-5 he lived a happy life in his nice peaceful town and family with a fair king.He was nice and adventurous.He loved traveling with his dad to chop trees.But when one day a ork pack was spotted near them for Maliran didn't know what orks were he thought everyone was nice and kind!So this is where my true adventure begins.The men were sent out to try take out all the orks.But it was to much they were all dead from the snipers.My mother ran with me in her arms (Eventhough I was 6)a ork saw her running and shot her I rolled out of her hands and ran to the nearest cave I could I stayed there for atleast the whole night until I figured it was clear.When I got out I was crying I guess people heard me from a far and came toward me to see what it is.I heard them coming and hid I peaked and it wasn't a ork but a Human I quickly ran out and called for him.He saw me and called for me to come up.I quickly ran up thinking there was food (For I hadn't had dinner or lunch the day before).

When I got up it was quite the merry gathering everyone was dancing and eating they told me that they were attacked by the same pack of orks!I told them the same thing had happened to me.Everyday we would go around looking for a camp and laughing,joking,singing,dancing,playing music.It was quite the great time everyday was a adventure!One day a new town was attacked a boy about the same age as Maliran.They became great friends for both loved exploring.

What are your characters ambitions?:To continue safetly on his great adventures,also to stop the orks when he gets older.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:Me :D

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:I am 11 when the story ends and I like to wear a hat.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I would kindly offer food for the cheapest thing he has.Then I would ask if he would join our group.He would say "I will.Thank you so much you are kind".I would bring him to our camp and he became friends with another dwarf.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I would slip with nothing behind him then poke him.He would be distracted while I would grab the dwarf and run.Then I would ask him if he could join my group he would say "Defintaly!" then I would take him to camp where he would become friends with the merchant dwarf.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down,a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:Everyone starts laughing at him I start to feel bad for him I grab him by the hand and pull him up eventhough people were laughing at me I just walk away and give him a new walking stick (which was the cheapest thing at the dwarfs shop that I got)he thanks me but I yell "Wait do you want to join my group he says "Absoutlotly!".I show him camp and he was a great story teller!

I would like to thank you for looking at my application!Bye!

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums. PM me with why you cannot.

Please add some server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki. Eleven is extremely young for an Elf, still a child. He would have difficulty surviving without parents or traveling on his own.

The Open Response Questions should be expanded on slightly.

There are punctuation errors throughout.

A good attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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