[Denied][Elf] Application - Ally (Second Try)

[Ally6060 0]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: [Elf] Ally6060    

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone:PST, USA (Pacific Standard Time)

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes, I have.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played on many different roleplaying servers.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I searched for top 10 servers when I was bored and Lord of the Craft came up so I checked it out.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/82274-elf-application-ally/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):I have.

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing:You get to make up a fictional character and play as that person, and you get to be someone or something that you admire or want to be similar too.

Meta-gaming:Meta Gaming is what you do not want to do. It involves information you have to acquire outside of the role play.

For example:If in Minecraft, you didn`t have name titles above your head, and you called someone by their name. That would be meta-gaming. You would`ve had to recognize the skin to know their name. You would`t be able to know their name if you had never seen them before, which then creates,meta-gaming.

Power-emoting:When you make actions happen that aren`t realistic.

For Example: You walk in to the dwarven empire and suddenly turn invisible without a invisibility potion. Then you go and steal the largest diamond ever found without being noticed. That would be power emoting because that was impossible to happen with your character.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name:Allsriel Rhuidel

Current Age:19    

Sub-race (if any):High Elf

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Ambitions for the Future:I am Allsriel Rhuidel. I have lived a pretty bland, eventless life. Ever since my mother died by an orc battle, my father has been very protective. He hasn`t let me out of the house very much. I have gotten to explore about half of The Elder Tree City of Normandor. I live on the eastern side of things. My mother was a high elf. She married my father,another high elf,the two elves were madly in love. And then they had me. They told me, " I hope you have children like yourself, Allsriel." Then one year later,my mother went out to go gathering. She collected berries and other goods to then later sell. But one day she came across an orc group. They were fierce. And all she had was a dagger. She commonly used it to whack pieces of stems off plants. She tried, but she was weak. She couldn`t fight them all. There was one orc found dead. The rest live on till this very day.

     My father had been working as a guard. He had done very well in his career. He was high in rank. Saved our county a few times. I don`t know what I would be without him. But since my mother died, he just hasn`t been the same. He has been acting quite differently. He seems close to suicide. He says I keep him hanging on. That is why I think what I do. Now he is a farmer. He goes through hard labor everyday, trying to make a living. Trying to keep us with food. He also sells his crops to some of the local inns to gain money. I want him to stop. I want him to just take a break from his stress. I tell him I can do his job for day. So he can just relax,and see what a day in a life in my shoes is like. He has been refusing. But last week I got him to do it. I am not the best farmer, but I did okay. I didn`t tell him about my day because it would stress him out. Later that last week, he became more lenient. He let me be free. I also turned 19! He said I could go on my own.

    Yesterday I left. I packed all of my gear. I haven`t been out for to long. I am hoping to find a man. I want a strong high elf. I want him to either be a hunter,monster slayer, or a guard. All of those are very manly. I want him to be strong. I am hoping we can find a descent home. I like being outdoors. I thought it would be amazing to live in a large "tree house", as the humans would call it. I don`t consider it a "tree house". All it is is an average home,especially for those wood elves, like my father.I hope I have a spectacular future ahead of me!

Ambitions for the Future:I want to get married to a high elf. One who is strong and buff. I also want to find a house with, "the wow factor".

Personality:I am a outdoor elf. I love being outside. I am usually friendly and nice, but when I get set off I become snotty and rude.

Skills:I am talented in literature, swordsmanship, and I am very stealthy. I am bad at animal herding, mining, and overconfidence.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):I have blonde,long hair,and dark blue eyes. I am very muscular and strong. I am not the kind of person you want to be in a fight or

argument with because I get mean and rude when you anger me. Also, if you try to hurt my family you are dead. I am very protective because of the lose of my mother. You don`t want to get physical with this high elf in particular.   

 

 

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character:She is an only child.

 

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]

[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]

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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer:If I was striding in the forest, probably on the job, I would use my stealth skills to sneak up and grab the wood elf. I would ask the child questions and make sure he was okay. Hopefully, he would respond," I am fine. A little shook up,but I`m fine."

I would say,"Okay. Where is your home from here? Do you know?"

The little wood elf would shake his head and say,"Yes. I know my way back home. Thank you. You are so very kind. I would pay you in return,but I don`t have any minas on me."

I would kindly say," No need to pay. It is the thought that counts. Now make your way home. Alright?"

"Ok,"The little elf was heading off on his way, but turned his and mentioned,"What`s your name?"

I would respond, " Allsriel, Allsriel Rhuidel."

Then I would walk back to the group of high elves.

I would say,"Hello. How are you guys?"

"Aren`t you going to,like, scold us or something?"said what seems the leader of the pack.

"No," I respond,"I don`t care what you choose to do with your life. It`s yours, not mine."

"Thanks. Anyone else wouldn`t except us for who we are. Thanks again, it means a lot."

"Your welcome. Now I got to run."I say as I start to leave. As I`m walking away, I hear them starting to talk about me, in a good way.

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

 

Answer:If I was walking in the forest and saw a frail man fall to his knees with a thud right in front of me, I would kindly help him up. I would keep my eyes on the prize, the gold coins.

I would say," Here you go. You dropped these minas."

"Oh,keep them,besides I don`t have a place to carry them."The old man said.

"Oh, thank you so much. You are so kind."I said excitedly,"Now let`s take you to the local healer. He is about 7 blocks away from here."

"Alright. Let`s go. I think I broke my hip."

"That`s fantastic…Follow me. If you start hurting I can try and carry you. I am pretty strong for a 19 year old."

"Ok. I think I will be able to make the few block travel."Responds the frail old man.

And off we went away into the town.

 

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

 

Answer: "Hello."I say kindly," I see your merchandise you have on display." I think to myself.What do I need? He has a food pack,but I am pretty good in that situation. I have a dagger and a sword. I don`t have any arrows for my bow. That is what I will purchase. 

"Yes it is very nice. A dagger,food,bow,arrows, maybe you need something repaired. I can do that here ,too." Says the dark elf in a high screechy voice.

"I would like arrows. How much?"I question.

"Oh well, that is a good question. The price varies young girl."He says darkly,"You can either get a bow and arrows for 20 minds or a set of a dozen arrows for 15 minas."

"First, I am not little. I`m 19. Anyways. I would like a pack of 12 arrows, no bow. I already have one equipped with me. But, 15 minas is just too much. How about 5."I say a little frightened of the the salesman. In my head I am thinking. I have 41 minas. I can make this deal work. But 15 minas is just to much.

"Well, let me think… no. 5 is to little. See I have to make a profit here. 10 minas."Says the high elf.

"5. 5 and 5 ounces of sugar." I think to myself, this must work he has a label for sugar,but none there.

"Well aren`t you observant? That deal will work for me."The trader happily says.

I give him 5 ounces of my 8 ounces of sugar. Leaving me with 3 ounces. "And here are coins."I whisper. Now I am left with 36 minas. I am pretty good at haggling if I do say so myself, I think. The salesman hands me the arrows and tells me to have a good day as I storm off because much time was wasted.

 

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