[Denied][Pending] [Elf] Yourmomminecraft 3Rd Try

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: YourMomMinecraft
How old are you?: 13
Time-Zone: Eastern
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Role-playing is my favorite thing to do in Minecraft
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Google search engine
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...urmomminecraft/
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Carrying out a role and never breaking character.
Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is using information that you learned OOC, IC
Power-emoting: It describes what the character is doing. Example: *Johnny winks at Lisa*

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Lenny B. Orchinwood
Current Age: 20
Sub-race (if any): Wood Elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): My childhood was a pretty bland one. I lived with my father, was mostly out hunting for food, and my mother, who was usually selling fathers hunted materials at the market. Not much ever happened but the day I turned 16, my father took me hunting for the first time.

It was the most dangerous thing I had ever done. Before my 16th birthday, my father took me to bow practice and I was pretty good if I might say so myself. So we went hunting, but it was a bad day for a new hunter like me. The snow was high and it was extremely hard to walk anywhere without tripping on something hidden in the snow. The dwarves took advantage of this. They stormed us from the left. I got one arrow out before they killed father. The arrow was a hit. I ran home for my life, but the dwarves weren't chasing me anymore. I'm lucky to be alive and I'm hunting for revenge.
Ambitions for the Future: Kill all of those damned dwarves!
Personality: Cruel, athletic
Skills: Hunting, archery, and surviving on my own
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):Wood elf archer                             
Any other details you wish to share about your character: Must...get...REVENGE!!!!

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event infull. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: Get out my bow and shoot close to them but purposefully miss them. They begin to charge. I manage to get two more arrows out before one of them catches my robe. I fall to the ground, screaming and unsheathing my sword to strike with. The elder of the village hears my screams and runs over, only to find 5 high elves...dead in front of me.

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses infront of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: I run up to him and worriedly ask, "Are ye ok?" He replies "Yes, I'm fine" I help him pick up all of the coins and put them back in the pouch. I give him an escort home just incase there are any robbers out there. When we get to his home, he gives me 5 gold coins as thanks. I walk away happily.

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer: I say "My robe is dirty and bloody from those damned high elves. Ye got anythin' in there fer me?"

The trader replies "I got some padded body armor in there if that's what yer lookin' fer"

"That's perfect, how much do ye charge?" I asked

"50 gold coins" The trader said

"50 gold coins!? it's just a measly chest plate! I'll pay 25 gold coins or I'll have yer head!" I exclaimed

The trader replied "Oh, you ain't ever heard of emerald encrusted armor, have ye?"

"No, why would ye encrust a chest plate with such a valuable mineral?" I asked

"Legends say it gives you mystical powers. If you want it, it's 35 coins" The trader said

I reply "Deal"

We shake hands and I recieve the item and pay for it.

I feel much safer now with an emerald encrusted chest plate and I'm confident about killing all of those dwarves!

[Queen of Aegis 174]

 

- Power-emoting definition is wrong

- Roleplaying and metagaming definitions are too short

- Biography is too short, lacks server lore and is unoriginal (killed parents is overused)

- 1st ORQ; You are not allowed to commit any villainous crimes without a VA (that includes killing without being provoked)

- 1st ORQ lacks dialog

- 2nd ORQ is too short

- 3rd ORQ is too short

 

You may reapply 24 hours after the edit

 

If you have any questions feel free to PM me

 

P.S. sorry it took a while, I got extremely busy IRL

 

~BoomBox~

Edited March 1, 2013 by Queen of Aegis
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