[Denied]Darklord2002 Application [Human]

[DarkLord2002 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: DarkLord2002
How old are you?: 15
Time-Zone: Central time 
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: many MMORPGS many differnt Minecraft servers such as The Land Of Dalasia
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: From friends and on planetminecraft

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: 
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): 
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: to act as a character  to fit into a story or act etc

Meta-gaming: to take information that you found out of game to use in game to change the out come for example 

if i were to find a post about a upcoming event and then use that to my advantage in game

Power-emoting: to change some thing that could have had a different out come example Damon stabs the orc in the back making him bleed to death 

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Damon Tyranus
Current Age: 31
Sub-race (if any): None
Clan (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Damon was born in a small cottage on a hill side. Damon didn't know much about the outside world he grew up with his parents always saying it was to dangerous to leave this place  Damon never understood why till a couple of years later when two strange men in big armor showed up at the cottage Damon was in the forest at the time but he could hear screaming from the cottage he ran back as fast as he could to see his parents on the floor dead and two men standing over them Damon let out a yelp  to two men looked at him Damon ran for his life  he managed to out run them but got lost in the forest  Damon was hungry and thirsty  after countless hours of trying to find his way out he fainted. he woke up in a small village  with an old man watching over him this mans name was Orgnaf . Damon lived with Orgnaf for many years to come Orgnaf trained Damon in the ways of the Sword. Damon grew up to join the army and rose up to the Title Commander  but during and attack Damon was wounded really badly and burnt, Damon had rolled  a cliff hardly surviving. Everyone had thought that Damon had died in that battle. Damon had woken up at the bottom of a cliff, Damon screamed for help but he knew this time there was no one to help him. To this day  damon wonders the wilds just trying to get bye he tried going to the army trying to claim him self as not dead but no one belived him he was to burned beond reconision. so  

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do? Answer:Damon looks at the man for a brief second and thinks to him self what should i do pondering it over in his head he decides just to tell the guards about the strange man and continues with his life

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a

large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armor and an iron longsword, how do you react? Answer: Damon sees the old man suffering and can just watch him be killed by these bandits Damon looks around to see if he can find anything Damon finds a rock and throws it at them and says OI OVER HERE the bandits turn and start to chase Damon but due to the fact they are in heavy armor and Damon in leather gives him the advantage Damon lures them into a think forest and he uses his speed to duck and weave in between trees to attack the bandits to the point when the bandits surrender Damon decides to let them live and lets them go. Damon then returns to see if the old man had been injured   he was fine the old man offers Damon some food and a place to rest and Damon takes him up on his offer.

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens). Answer:  “Fifty gold, take it or leave it!” Said Damon in smug attitude. The shop keeper was fairly stingy about his wepon supplies, and was not willing to let them go cheaply. "No. At least 80." Damon stared. He despised being here as it was, being in the Oren capital. He wanted to be anywhere else and was only here to restock and help a acquaintance in need. “FINE, just take my money. The quicker I get done with the dumb haggling, the sooner I can get back to what I want to do!” Damon finally paid the number the shop keeper had asked for and turned to leave, when the shop keeper called out to him. “Wait, don’t you want more?” Said the attendant, to which Damon gave a quick, “Not if you keep charging me these high prices.” They once again began to negotiate, until Damon had finally gotten him down to the lowest prices he could, for some preserved meats and vegetables and a few more Arrows. Rather happy with the deals, he quickly  made for the cities gate.

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

Your application is being denied because:

- You failed to include any server lore into your biography. Try to include town names, city names, historical figures, etc. Your character also should not start off in a high position in the army when you begin.

- You did not post your character's skin. Use this guide ( http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/ ) to help you.

- Your first open response question is too short. Please expand it.

- You failed to post the full application, found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/80614-official-application-format-application-rules/

- You did not use punctuation... Grammar is important, please fix this!

Better luck next time! If you have any questions, feel free to private message me. Do not re-apply for 24 hours after THIS post, or you will automatically be denied.

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

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