[Denied]Rune J Fireheart's Application.

[Rune_Fireheart 0]

Minecraft Account Name:
How old are you?: 17
Time-Zone: Us central
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Tabletop rpgs and a few MMOs
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking up servers and this came up
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: none
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/page__st__2500
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!

Role-playing: An act of hiding in the lore of a game, to disappear and reappear as a new person
Meta-gaming: To take a game, and bend it into something better, something new....   
Power-emoting: An act of forcing another person to participate in something that is not what they want to do...
In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Rune Jackson Fireheart
Current Age: 22
Sub-race None
Past / History

My
childhood was... sub-par at best. At the beginning it was good, see
long time ago my great great great grandfather was contacted by a
Daemon, though the story was fuzzy, He completed a quest to destroy an
unholy forge for the Daemon, who rewarded my grandfather with the
information to make a more powerful forge then most. He made his own
name, Fireheart and made a forge with the knowledge he gained. It was
just me and my dad, since my Mom died in a battle or something, I don’t
know, Dad would not talk about it... He had taught me how to use a forge
and I was getting pretty good.

Then
when I turned 14 a great storm came and blew a huge chunk out of the
house, and when we fixed it up, we found my the First Firehearts
Journal, which showed that He did make contact with the Daemon and
Destroy the forge but He did something horrible.. He had took the thing
that had powered the forge, which burned souls from the nether. The book
He then took the knowlege of the Daemon and the “Soul Conduit” and
found a way to hid the taint that slipped through the forge by putting
it into the winds.

This
went against the fundamentals of God and our religion and we were a
very religious family. In fact we had a church we went to, and the last
thing me and my Dad did before that book was found was Dad buying me
some church clothes..That book destroyed the bit of the Firehearts that
were left. We were not a big family and now we were hunted down, blamed
for everything that happened in town, I ran before I was killed and
haven’t seen my dad since. I have been walking ever since, only stopping
for a Tavern and when someone is in danger, having only the church
clothes that his dad gave him, all those long years ago.... Trying to
earn back the Daemons trust, to fix what my Grandfather broke.
Ambitions
for the Future: To redeem his family name by making contact with a
Daemon to fix the damage Between the Firehearts and the Daemons.

Personality: Semi Optimistic, Honorable, And a pinch Paranoia, when it comes to new people due to past

Skills:
Was an apprentice smith until the truth of the Fireheart Forge was
discovered, Ok with a sword but better with an anvil, A Photographic
memory, and a little bit of tailoring (From having to resize and patch
the clothes he has been wearing for years...

Appearance Due to errors I will have to mirror you to my photo bucket, sorry about that... http://s1275.beta.photobucket.com/user/Rune_Fireheart/media/2013-03-13_223438_zps704a7588.png.html

Any
other details you wish to share about your character: Though my family
was religious.. I am not so much anymore, I do stop by churches
sometimes... When I can...

Open-Response-Questions
Each
question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
____

Whilst
in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily
making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no
good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer:
First I would mark him in my mind, so I could always know what he looks
like. Then I would go to the guards and inform them that there might be
a criminal on over where I was standing. Then comes the chase where,
with blade in hand, I would rush to get him to the guards where he would
be put through due process

Whilst
wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in
which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old
man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed
bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather
armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer:
I remain calm and do not jump to conclusions, besides I doubt I could
take on the bandits unless I could jump them. Then I would sneak up
behind them and Slit the firsts ones through this taking on of them down
would allow me to run from the second and let the old man get away.
Finally I would stab the last bandit till is keels over dead, loot them,
and go to a tavern to drink what just happened away...


3.
You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a
small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and
notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that
he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is
willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do?
(Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that
happens).

Answer:
I would walk up to the stand and ask to see his collection of metals.
He would show me a colorful display of iron from the different areas,
then I would notice that one of them is better than the rest with my
keen eye for metal I would notice that the metal, while not impressive
on the outside, is a rare metal that is easier to sharpen. I tell him
that I want it for some filler for my boots and get off paying only ⅕ of
its real price.


 

[Aiden 173]

Under Review

 

 

 

Please wait 24-hours or you fill face an instant denial.

 

Reasons:

 

1. Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect. You may use a guide on the forums or do a google search but do not directly copy & paste anything; use your own words.

 

2. In your backstory, there are lore inconsistencies. Daemons wouldn't really be meeting with any of your grand-parents, perhaps you should read up on them on the wiki, here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=Daemon Another thing that most humans believe in the creator, not a God. (If the Daemon part was just a lie of your character's parents, then this is fine, but if it isn't then please change this)

 

3. In your second open response question, it seems as if you killed the bandits too easily, as they not only had better gear then you, but they also had more numbers. Perhaps explaining in detail what happened in the fight would clarify this.

 

4. Please expand a bit more on your open response questions. Perhaps add dialogue and the like. 

 

Please private message me if you have any questions or if you need any help!

[Aiden 173]

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