[Denied]Application [Human]

[44rachet 1]

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Minecraft Account Name:44rachet

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone:Pacific

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:On multiple medieval RP servers and a few Harry Potter themed ones

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching for a new LOTR RP server.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.minecraft...0#entry21417035

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84110-application-human/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84082-human/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:


Role-playing:
When a person takes on the personality of either an imaginary or
real-life person for the enjoyment of acting in their own interpretation
of that individuals personality. The personality can be either a polar
opposite or closely related personality to that of the person whose
acting.

Meta-gaming:
Using any information that is beyond the reach of your characters
ability to obtain in-game, or couldn't otherwise obtain, unless through
non-RP contemptible means.

Power-emoting: When an individual uses emotes to commit an act that prevents other players from reacting or stopping the act. Such as i shot him between the eyes and he was dead.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Jack Treaty
Current Age:21
Sub-race (if any):Northerner
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):He grew up in a small mining town where the daily things where always wake up. Go to the mine. Finish mining. Turn in ores. Go home. And then wake up the next morning for the same list of chores until one day he decided enough was enough and he would travel to the city of gondor and try to find work as a blacksmith. So he left bringing what few minas and provisions he had. One day on the rode he found an old man who was huddled in a ball on the side of the rode severly beaten,worried he went up to the old man and as soon as he drew near a group of bandits appeared! Fighting against them with his dagger he held his own. Parrying thrusting and dodging for what seemed like eternity. But alas there was too many and then soon began to over power him trying to find an opening to run out of and then he saw it next to the beaten old man. charging forward he burst through the wall only to fall on his face.Tripped by the old man! For it turns out the old man wasnt so old or beaten after all but actualy a man of the age of 30 with a wig and make-up. Swearing for his foolishness he tried to get away but the man kicked him in the gut stopping his scrambling. Looking up Jack stared at the mans cruel unforgiving eyes and the man shouted "Boy whats your name?"

"Jack...Jack Treated" Jack stuttered.

"And what where you doing on this road!"

"why im trying to get to Gondor" Jack replied feebly

"Ha did you hear that boys trying to get to Gondor! now tell me what where you planning to do when you get to Gondor?"

"I was going to try and find a job as a blacksmith"

"O so what we have here is a boy 18 trying to make his way to Gondor all alone to become a blacksmith"

The men begin to laugh breaking out into tears. "well boy here is what i have to say there hasnt been work in Gondor for many years" then being pulled up by the brute of a man Jack spit in the mans face saying with a cocky smile"well wherever there is somone like you there is plenty of work for me"

The man lifted his fist to punch Jack but then stopped "you know Mr. Treaty i like your spunk but ill still have to kill you for what you said to me. Well this is it Jack thought death by a man whose breath smells of onions and spoiled milk.

"But since i like you ill give you a fair chance against me" dropping Jack to his feet as he said it

"you remind me of myself at your age" the man said "but i almost died many times to men like myself now also"

"well if i turn out like you i hope my breath smells better" Jack replies

The man belows laughing saying through tears "im going to enjoy killing you now"

"wait" Screams Jack

"what is it" The man bellows"

"what is your name?"

"Arulan"

"Arulan what?"

"ill tell you the rest if you beat me"

The two walked ten paces away from eachother and where each handed a knife. The men around them formed a circle and where placing bets on who would win.

"what are my odds" Jack asked a man next to him

"40-1" the man replies

"id like to place a bet of 20 minas" Jack says cockily throwing a bag

"a man walks between the two saying when the fight will start

"5" Sweat rolls down Jacks face

"4" He can feel his stomach ache from lack of food and the blow he took

"3"Better say me prayers Jack thinks

"1" To late

The man charges at Jack bellowing and Jack easily side steps the man sending him through the circle of men

"well that was pretty pathetic"Jack taunts

the man bellows "now boys this is how you stick a pig"

He charges Jack keeping his arms wide so Jack wont be able to doge them

Then at the last second Jack dives under the man and cuts the mans calves.

Hot blood pours from the wounds splattering the sand.

The man limps to the edge of the circle and Jack says "looks like this pig has a bite worse than its Oink" and proceeds to oink to the mens delight. "Treaty! you have made a fool out of me infront of my men and now you must pay"

"well it wasnt that hard"

angered and seeing red the man charges at Jack one last time and to the mans astonishment Jack jumps over the man cutting his back. Dying the man says to Jack "my name is Arulan Madier"

"well Mr. Madier it was nice to meet you and im sorry how this turned out" and Jack proceeds to walk away down the road to the astonished wide mouthed bandits picks up the Minas he won. Out side the limits of Gondor he finds a boy no older than 10 staring at a deer in the clearing curios he asks the boy why he isnt out playing "that deer it looks so plump and ive not eaten for a long time"

"well im sorry to hear that" and Jack grabs his bow from his pack and 5 arrows he knows he isnt the best archer proceeds in nocking all 5 "watch this" he whispers to the boy releasing the arrows and watching them fly through the air like birds 2 of the fall three feet off another never leaves the bow but the last two strike home downing the deer. The boy sprints faster than any human at the falling deer and before it touches the ground grabs it. He then proceeds to wide his mouth until it was as wide as the deer and swallows it whole. Suddenly the boy has a fit of spasms and begins to change...Into a deer it was not boy but a transfigurist that changes into what it eats. Losing arrow after arrow at the creature he runs awa. But is too slow and the creature is upon him knocking him over picking up a rock he throws it down the creatures mouth and the deer turn into a rock. Getting up and wiping his trousers Jack dusts off his trousers and continues on.

 

 

                                                                                         The end.

 

Ambitions for the Future:[/b] To continue to Gondor and find a new life
Personality:[/b] Cocky, witty, and Optimistic
Skills:[/b] Stealthy and handy with a knife in the dark. And OK at archery
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b] http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1124487/jack-treaty/
Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b]
Dosnt trust old people or little children
[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: As the man runs past I trip him making him fall on his face then pulling him of to the side i say "who are you and why are they after you"

depending on what his answer is ill eaither let him go or return him to the gaurds

(ill pretend that he was trying to escape from the jail for he was wrongly acused of stealing)

"I...I...I was a... acused  of stealing from the king"

"and what was it that you "didnt" steal"

"his crown"

"youve got to be kidding me doesnt he wear that on his head?"

"not when he is sleeping"

I then proceed to search him making sure he is telling the truth. But soon the gaurds are close."go hide in the hay and ill come back" I order.

"ok" he replies and stumbles into the hay. I then leave and take to the inside of the city and then the roof tops looking for cloths that are drying. Finally i find a womans gown that should fit the man if i put a mellon or two inside where the bussom is. Buying
some melons i return to the man and tell him to shave and put on the clothes while i get a horse. I then find the nearest horse merchant. "how much i ask?" pointing and a fine black stallion.

"20 Minas"

"you want 20 Minas for a horse that belongs in glue?" trying to make him think the horse isnt as fine as it is

"belongs in glue does he my boy? why thats the finest horse ive breed all year i hope to make a whole line of 'em"

"well then you should get yourself a deal with the glue merchants down the street because youll need them to make a profit of such a foul line"

"is that so?"

"now being the generous man i am ill give you 10"

"now that i am human and must eat like every one so i want 17"

"17! why my good sir this horse looks so sickly ill give you 15"

grumbling the man replies "15 it is". I then proceed to return to the man that now looks like a very fetching woman and tell him to get on behind me asking if he has any family. I do in a village not to far. Then i bribe a man to say to the gaurds he saw them go to the east while we are going west. Trotting out of the town we leave unnoticed.

[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer:
I no longer trusts old guys so he throws the sword at one of the bandits hoping to cut him down and runs away. To get the man some help hiding his leather armor.

[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer: "I would like to purchase the bow and the daggers. ill give you 20" i begin

"20 why what are you trying to do starve me! I want at least 40! why these dagger are made of the finest metals of the dwarves and thise bow is no normal wood but orc tusk and made by the elves"

"well my small friend it seems like you know your stuff . Therfore ill give you 26"

"26 why  even a small man must eat i want 35"

"know that i must be going and ill use these weapons for the good of the kingdom and so i can get to gondor"

"why didnt you say you were going to gondor! my cousin lives there and no courier is willling to take my package to him"

"what is in the package?" i ask courios now

"why just salamander gut, sheeps bladder, toads liver, human finger, dwarf tounge, a piece of gum, tonail clipping, which where free of shipping!, gator tears, oliphant ears, orcs arms, and an evil charm"

"why my good sir what line of work does your cousin partake in"

"necromancy"the man replies smiling at me

"well its not my problem so ill do it"

"o and it will still cost you 10 Minas"

"damn you my short friend but we have a deal"

[everblue2er101 906]

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All three definitions are copied from another application. Plagiarism is a serious offense on the Lord of the Craft, and for this reason you are hereby banned from applying for two months.

 

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