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[zachzilla1211 0]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name:Zachzilla1211
How old are you?:13
Time-Zone:Central
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Not much but I role-played with people on a hack/mine server.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:Petridagamernerd
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/86095-deniedmy-human-application/#entry749475
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):http://www.minecraftforum.net/user/1660015-zachzila1211/
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes I will

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Playing as a character you created with his/her own history and to play as if you where them and acting by what you have put in their history. Such as a orc who is a merchant that was orphaned when he was 6.
Meta-gaming: It's when someone makes a character but doesn't act like that character. Like having a character that is a human who hates the wilderness but poaches.
Power-emoting:
It's when someone will emote something that prevents someone from reacting to that emote. Such as a elf shooting his bow at a dwarf and killing him instantly with out the dwarf knowing.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Hubrik
Current Age:37
Sub-race (if any):Northerner
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Before he was born his parents went to Asulon. He lived in his parents inn most of his childhood. Many adventurers came to the inn and he loved their stories. He loved to see scholars and read their books. He had no friends and hayed going outside. He would read books and write stories for young visitors. He would play the lute for all of the quests. His father died when he became 60. His mother went into a deep depression and he had to run the inn. Most of the visitors came for a hour and got drunk. Seven years passed and he had many offers to sell the inn. His mother died so he had to sell the inn.

     He bought a house in Nuremburg with the money he got from selling the inn and became a tailor. He stayed in business for six years. He went to Solace to get a better education. Five years had passed and he had traveled all over Asulon. After joining a caravan he sold his shop. Never had he lived so horribly before he joined the caravan. He ate stew made from milk and fish, it was horrible. He slept on his horses back. His caravan was attacked by bandits and they stole almost all his money. They had starved him and imprisoned him a two months. He escaped by stealing a bandits sword. He went to the cloud temple to become a healer. Using his tailoring skills he made a purple and green surcoat and bought armor. When he came to Anthos he went to the cloud temple to start his adventure.
Ambitions for the Future: Improving his swordsmanship skills and archery.[/b]
Personality: Always willing to do anything to get the job done and is very fierce and passionate about his beliefs.[/b]
Skills: Healing, Swordsmanship, Tailoring[/b]
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):He is bald, has blue eyes, and pale skin.http://www.tumblr.co...theamethystking[/b]
Any other details you wish to share about your character:No[/b]

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: Slowly pick up my speed and walk in his direction. I start to jog and fix my gaze on him. I start sprinting towards him with great hubris and draw my sword." Guards there is an assassin in the keep!" I yell for all to hear. The guards deftly draw their swords and surround him. " Who are you?!" I demand from the figure. There is nothing but piercing silence. " Answer!" Nothing. " Emperor what should we do?" Asks a guard with a disgusted look. " Take him to the dungeon for questioning. And for you knight. You have done me a great service. One of my guards will reward you." And I would get my pay immediately and leave.


[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer: " Hey, who are?" With his eyes half closed. " None of your business!" Yells one of the bandits and spits at me. " Easy, My name is Mort and these are my mercenaries. You should head the other way." He says with a grin. " Do you think I will kill you? I will steal from you?" " A man with a sword walks by my home. Wouldn't you think the same thing?" I pause thinking about what he said. " That makes sense, but I will leave you alone." I say still thinking about his accusation. " Good now go." I think about how a man can be so worried that he would hire mercenaries as I sprint away hastily.

[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer: "Hello sir, what do you have to sell." " Everything on display." He says as I disregard his words. "I would like some purple dye for say, four Minas." Waiting for my offer to sink in. I watch as he thinks about what he will counter with. " Five Minas?" "No, only four it's just dye. I need it too keep my coat it's colour." He sighs looking defeated. " Fine, here's your dye." He says with a sour expression as we exchange the money and dye. " Thank you, sir." I say while pushing the dye in my back and walk off.

   

[ski_king3 0]

Under Review

 

 

Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect.

 

I cannot view your skin. Just attach the image, please. If you don't know how to do this, please ask.

 

Lastly, your ORQ's are still a bit short, and a bit hard to follow. Perhaps try to make who is saying what a bit more clear?

 

Other than that, it seems pretty much fine.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply in 24 hours.

[ski_king3 0]

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