[Denied]4Th [Orc] Neverendum

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: NeverEndum

How old are you?: 17
Time-Zone: US East
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: World of Warcraft, The Old Republic, and Dungeons and Dragons.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: A friend
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/86711-orc-application-garland151-3/

 

http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-anthos-officially-t-h-e-1-roleplay-server/page__st__2880__gopid__22098957#entry22098957

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http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/86617-orc-application-garland151-2/

 

http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-anthos-officially-t-h-e-1-roleplay-server/page__st__2880__gopid__22071680#entry22071680

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http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/86565-orc-application-garland151/

 

 http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-anthos-officially-t-h-e-1-roleplay-server/page__st__2880__gopid__22056849#entry22056849

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-anthos-officially-t-h-e-1-roleplay-server/page__st__2920__gopid__22145128#entry22145128
Have you read the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: To take on the role as a character within a fantasy world.

Meta-gaming: To use outside information that the character does not know to take an action.
 

Power-emoting: To use an emote in such a way as to make it impossible for another character to react.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Orkkrin Durkkin
Current Age: 50

Race: Orc

Sub-race (if any): goblin

 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
 

         

        Orkkrin Durkkin was born to a small clan of outcasts of the goblin bloodline because they were accused of fleeing from battle with the undead. Though being born after this event Orkkrin was always told that it had no basis but the clan accusing them was far larger and stronger and thus they fled. Being ones for history Orkkrin and the other youths were taught the history of their clan, how to survive, how to repair tools, grow food, hunt, and outsmart their prey. Even though Orkkrin was not the best his father was still proud because Orkkrin was still skilled and that skill would be needed if and when they would return. However, this would not happen because when Orkkrin was ten his clan was attacked by bandits, who sought revenge for a raid that another clan had done, showing no mercy as they attacked in the dark and surprised his clan. Orkkrin be the sole survivor due to being buried under his dead family and being seen as just another dead orc.
 

          After nearly two days he crawled out weak, beaten, and scared he would have to continue on his own. He scavenged for what he could and before leaving he marked himself with the blood of his clan using their blood as ink he tattooed their memory onto his skin. He would not allow them to be forgotten even if only he would remember them. Then he left after burying them in the ground and given what rights he knew of from the stories they had once spoken. Angry at their deaths he tried tracking the bandits losing their trail and then having to find it again. Finally though he found them in a village a few days away from where his clan had been destroyed. Though he was angry and wanted revenge on them for what they had done, he was alone and after staring at the village for some time merely left deciding not to die in a hopeless revenge but to live on and bring glory for his family and clan. Thus he began to wander, to seek out the glory and valor he sought, not knowing where it was but simply wanting to obtain it.

        

Ambitions for the Future: Find glory and valor, to find a clan he can settle down in, to preserve the history of his now dead clan.

 

Personality: Orkkrin is generally hard headed but very loyal he will stand, even if reluctantly, by his allies. He still looks at the other races with some dislike but will not try to start a fight without reason believeing it to be dishonorable to goat a person to fight and therfore offering no glory in it. With the fact of him being an outcast Orkkrin chose not to speak much of the orc's native language instead learning and speaking a distorted common tongue.

 

Skills: Blacksmithing, farming, and hunting

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://imgur.com/8BZcILl&3cVhvQA

 

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. You are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?[/b]

Answer: Being an outcast of the orc clans I was raised some what differently then the others I see around me however, I feel no more comfortable with what he has said. I slowly walk up to him befor saying "What it you say bout savgery?" with him replying "Savagery my friend! Do you not see it around you? I have come to try and convince others to join me and follow me to other lands to other races and learning the ways of civilization!" I can only stare at him wondering how he hasn't been killed yet and mearly responding "No thank I civilazed enouf." Befor walking way leaving the city orc there to continue to try and convince others to join him.

 

[b]2. As you are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?[/b]

Answer: Having been in an outcast clan I hold little loyalty to this orc, this Goj of Krug, who is now yelling for all to hear in the arena. I simply sit as se speaks this and I watch as the others leave I am unsure as to what I should do. I decide that I should leave the city and wander the dessert and not get caught up in this ritual that I can't really understand. So I leave without a second glance having trouble wanting to go find a fight that has an actually challangeing opponent. However, to find such an opponent may mean heading toward the Oren or beond which happens to be the same way many other orcs are going. . .

[b]3. As you are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling. He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your character do?[/b]

Answer: Unsure of what he means I decide to join him and thank him for some of the roasted halfing. As I begin to eat the roasted halfing I happen to asked about who it was, to which the orc states that it was wandering in the dessert and half dead from the heat. While I find some humor in the story I feel slightly restless about the story. After getting my things I ask the orc if he could say which way the halfling was going and after that I set out to see if I may find an adventure and the glory  that I seek.

 

[LeRenardNoir 413]

Your application is getting better, although I still am not seeing a sufficient amount of lore. Try looking up the 'blah' on your forums, that is the official language of the orcs and goblins on LotC and learning it would certainly help displaying you know a bit about orc/goblin culture. I would recommend re-reading the lore and becoming familiar with orcish locations in Asulon. Adding more lore would certainly increase your chances of getting accepted!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you have any questions or concerns about your application.

Good luck on your next application!

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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