[Denied]Craftstomine's Application

[Craftstomine 6]

Out-Of-Character Information

"Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate."

 

Minecraft Account Name: Craftstomine

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone: GMT -6
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I recently attempted making my own RPG server, I gave up and figured it would be better to play on a more high-quality, better server. I also played on Massive Craft, Savage Realms RPG, and Blue Realms RPG. I also have played other RPG games. Such as World Of WarCraft, StarCraft, and Skyrim. 

How did you hear about Lord of the Craft?: I was recently looking around the internet for a decent, high-quality minecraft RPG server. This fit all my discriptions. It looks amazing.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: N/A

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): I already have. 

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow your biography?: Yes.

 

Definitions

"In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:
 

Role-playing: Role-Playing is pretend. It is the act of being a different persona or race. 

Meta-gaming: Murging Real life information with in-game information.

Power-emoting: Doing an action that another can reply to.

 

In-Character Information:

"Complete the following biography on your character": 

 

Full Name: Hadran Tybalt

Current Age: 27

Sub-race (if any): None

Past/History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): 

 

         As a child, Hadran was worked to his bones. He had little friends, and spent most his time hunting with his father. They hunted many animals, such as Deer and Rabbit. As Hadran grew, his family had moved from village to village. After age 10 Hadran had no real home. Only a family. Hadran grew to be arrogant, and stubborn. He had began to get into trouble, and was nearly executed. His father had explained the situation and the authorities had let him go. Hadran began to clean himself up after the age of 18. 

         

          When Hadran grew to be a man, he had matured. He had found a mentor in a small town near the coast. With him he learned mining, skilled masonry, and simple sword-fighting techniques. After leaving home Hadran learned to defend himself. He began to grow stronger and more wise with the teachings from his mentor. As of present day Hadran Tybalt is mature, noble, and happy to help in any way possible.

 

Personality: 

 

Humble, serious, and shrivolous. Due to all his teachings throughout his life, and frequently moving from place to place. 

 

Skills: 

Mining

Masonry

And little sword fighting skills

 

Appearance (this must include as in-game screenshot of your skin):

Dark brown hair, a beard, vest, gloves, worn out leather shoes, and short hair.

(sorry but I am not able to post a screenshot of my skin at the moment due to computer troubles.)

 

Answer the following questions: 

 

1. Whils in the mighty human capital, you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way twards the Emperor's palace- he is clearly up to no good. There are gaurds within shouting distance- What do you do?

 

I see the hooded figure, I look at it's hands to see if they are cupped, or holding something, possibly a knife. If I see a sign of a weapon, I simply stop the man and nicely ask to see his hands. If he does not reply, I yell to the gaurds to take a look.

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade,surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed withleather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer: I run to the old man's help and attack the two men, struggling to survive I swing my blade.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved upon if you are looking to re-apply in the future.

 

Your biography is short and includes no server lore. If you need help finding out lore page you can check here. Make sure you include cities, events, and other important things so we know your have somewhat of an understanding about our server.

 

Please post your character's skin so we can judge that it follows lore and is server friendly.

 

Please expand upon all of your definitions. They are vague and I do not get a very good understanding of whether you know them or not.

 

Your ORQs are too short. They could be expanded upon. Make sure you do at least one paragraph but I would suggest more.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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