[Denied]Application [Human] Leokul Ign: Ace134

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: ace134 (yes no capital)

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone: NZ +12 GMT

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have indeed

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I play D&D With friends often.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I have seen it on multiple forums such as the mindcrack fan forum, I have also seen it on the minecraft forum

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: None

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-anthos-officially-t-h-e-1-roleplay-server/page__st__3060__gopid__22432040#entry22432040

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes to the best of my knowledge I will.

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: To act as a character that is not yourself Example: I could be roleplaying as a nomad the wanders the barren landscape of a wartorn world.

Meta-gaming: In role-play this is any out of character action for example adjusting your actions on foreknowledge for example: Because I have read ahead I know this bridge is trapped so I shall avoid it.

Power-emoting:This is using an emote to take away the ability for another player to prevent the action For example: *Kills Joe and uses a spell so that he cannot come back to life* Or *You give my all your item and then run away*

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Leokul Gellantara

Current Age: 22

Sub-race (if any): None

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

​I hale originally from the city of Al'Khazar in the nation of Aegis. Where I grew up with my father and my twin brother, our mother had died in childbirth and our father was a blacksmith. We lived in a small building in the market district of town. It was crowded and small as we where quite poor. I had grown up always wishing to join the city guard while my brother had always wished to become a merchant. So I grew up training with a sword in the open fields outside of the city and my brother grew up training with the travelling merchants that would come and go. Eventually we both got our wish I joined the city guard at at the age of 19 and served under Felix Fansworth, My brother left the city to pursue his own goal the same year. Over the next few years life was good as food was plentiful thanks to my position in the guard.

But then when the attacks from the undead came I defended valiantly alongside my brother but eventually the order was sounded to abandon the city I was forced to flee the land, my father stayed behind he had decided long ago that that city would be his final resting place. I now reside in the city of Aldesberg in the land of Anthos I am currently a private in the Chapter of the lion, serving the Holy Oren Empire.

Ambitions for the Future:

To climb the the ranks of the Chapter Of The Lion and to start a family

Personality:

I am a happy person but very wary of strangers. I am dedicated to serving my nation.

Skills:

I am excellent with a sword and a skilled tactition.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

Underneath my Armour I have messy brown hair, I'm average height and strongly built

(The image I have attached is NOT the skin I wish to use, PM me and I will send you my actual skin)

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: Leokuls eyes scan the area searching for the best route to the figure, he eventually decides on the head on approach. His feet thud on the cobbles as a he runs toward the figure "Halt!" he shouts as he nears the figure. He turns to look at me and darts of into a alleyway Leokul gestures for one of the guards to follow. The figure turns a corner and Leokul darts into an alleyway he emerges in-front of the figure he stops and just as the other guards arrive he disappears in a blinding flash of light.

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: Leokul spots the bandits and ducks behind a tree, he silently draws his sword a shine runs up it as he removes it from its sheath. He bounds out from behind the tree running towards the bandits his feet make a slight crunching sound as they crush the grass, I jump just as the bandit nearest to Leokul turns. he land on top of the first bandit and slides his sword into his chest covering his blade with thick crimson blood. The second bandit lets out an almighty war cry as the first slumps to the ground, Leokul pulls his blade from the bandits body and turns to face the oncoming threat. He blocks the babditd first clumsy strike with his sword before the bandit comes back around wildly on of the swings slips past Leokuls defences and hits him in the shoulder. He lets out a grunt of oain before attacking the bandit with a last powerful blow, severing the bandits head from its body . Panting Leokul turns to face the old man. "T-t-t-thank you" He whimpers before offering Leokul a clinking bag of gold "T-t-t-take this as a sign of my gratitude" he nods his head before turning and leaving.

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: Leokul walks up to the stall with a smile "hello, i'm looking to purchase a sword, a new helm and a few potions. He nods and pulls a sword from a barrel and looks it over before handing it to Leokul "Crafted by the most skilled elves in all the land" Leokul turns it over in his hands before returning it to the shopkeeper "No thank you. I'll have that one please" he gestures to a display case sitting behind the counter the shopkeeper looks at the sword "sorry but that's not for sale" "1000 Gold pieces" Leokul replys " I'm sorry sir but its not for sale" The shopkeeper responds with a slight quaver to his voice "1500 gold pieces" Leokul says slamming his fist down on the table. The shopkeeper lets out a sigh before pulling it down from the case and placing it on the counter "Now I believe you where also looking for a helm correct?" Leokul simply nods as the shopkeeper takes a helmet from an Armour rack "name your price" Leokul turns it over in his hands before he responds "250" He looks at me dumbfounded "350" Leokul sighs and nods, the shopkeeper places the helm down on the counter next to the sword before pulling down a potions rack "Now what form of potion where you looking for? We have Love potions, Health potions And multiple vials of poison" "3 Health potions please" Leokul responds gesturing to the potions The man nods "100 each" He says with a smile "50 each" Leokul responds without a hint of mirth in his voice "60 take it our leave it" the shopkeeper responds sharply Leokul murmurs something under his breath before handing him the money collecting the items and heading for home.

Edit: Sorry the ORQ's are not in third persion, I shall fix this when I have spare time.

Edit: Fixed

Edit: The picture attached is not the skin i wish to use, pm me and I shall send you a picture.

Final edit I promise!: The post on the MC forum is outdated if you wish I could replace it.

[Princeton 396]

 

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Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to deny this -

 

If your character was a human and born in Aegis, he would be dead by now. Humans aren't gifted with the long lives of elves and it's been quite a substantial amount of time since Aegis. I suggest rereading the lore on the wiki to learn more about the current time period.

 

Your ORQ's could use a bit more dialogue and detailed actions within them to prove role-play knowledge. 

 

You may reapply in 24 hours from this post. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns!

[Princeton 396]

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