[Denied][Mountain Dwarf] Sharr Anlack: Lordbobby123

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: lordbobby123
How old are you?: 16
Time-Zone: GMT (UK)
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes I have.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played a little on an other roleplaying server and I have played a lot on DayZRP
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I saw one of your youtube videos.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: non.
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: yes and i will add it to my biography the best I possibly can.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Playing a game in a personality that isn't your own.
Meta-gaming: using knoledge that you gained outside roleplaying in a roleplaying situation.
Power-emoting: useing over powered emotes for example "you cut the head off tom before he can defend" 

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character: Sharr had learned to fight from a young age. Always a natural with combat. The thought of battle got his blood pumping and heightened his senses. At the age of 2 seasons (14 years) Sharr had trained with the men of his clan, cutting, slicing and parrying until it felt natural, the weapon an extension of his arm. One day, when he was training, the clan Elder came to Sharr, and asked him if he wanted to lead the raid on the bandits which had been pillaging the clan of their items. He asked if he felt ready. Sharr replied with a grunt picking up his weapons and walking out the village, his men in tow. The fight was a bloodbath, Sharr was rumored to have taken most of the kills. When they returned the whole village was talking about Sharr's battle feats. But inside Sharr knew that as soon as he gave the first blow he became blood raged and killed, and killed, until no enemy was left standing. The next day Sharr left the village, his mind filled with bigger and better thing, he wanted to develop his combat skills he wanted to become powerful. On the road he walked into a short bent over man who was carrying no weapons but had his hands cocked in strange positions, Sharr asked the man what he was doing, and after a long bit of debating the man told Sharr he was a Druid and that he was practicing magic. The idea of magic instantly took Sharr he wanted to learn how to be a magician.

 

Full Name: Sharr Anlack

Current Age: 8 seasons (56) 
Sub-race (if any): Mountain Dwarf
Clan (if any): Thu'rak (now disbanded)
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):[/b]
Ambitions for the Future: to become a magician or a Druid
Personality: Hot headed and angry, always inquisitive about combat but does look for a fight often.
Skills: good at combat, inquisitive, can think well he isn't angry, which isn't very often.  
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1375452/green-dwarf/
Any other details you wish to share about your character:

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?[/b]

Answer: Sharr had been mining hard all day looking for some materials to make a new weapon with, when stud up to take a swig of drink he saw it, the deposit of beautiful diamonds! This was the jack pot all Dwarfs are looking for! He quickly looked for a way across and he spots the thin rock bridge. What to do he thinks that to thin for me to do?! But he then has a amazing idea! 

"Oi Far'tuk come over here!" he called

"Yeah? what you want now Sharr?"

Far'tuk was a young dwarf decent miner from a trust worthy family

"If i tie this rope around you, could you go over there and mine those diamonds and you can have 40%?" 40% was enough for a young dwarf looking for some prestige

"Yeah sure!" Far'tuk replied

Sharr took a long rope and tied it well around Far'tuk and ushered him across, Far'tuk got the diamonds and safely returned, they split them and headed to the pub for a night of drinking.

[b]2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?[/b]

Answer: As soon as Sharr saw the knife he took out his massive battle ax and whirled punching the unarmed one hard in the face and downing him in one he carried on this spin and smashed the armed Dwarf in the leg with the flat of his ax head breaking his knee. Sharr quickly kicked the knife out of reach and spun to the crying Dwarf and told him not forcefully but not to lightly to get away quickly, it came out as a shout unfortunately, the blood was pumping around his body it felt so good, he just loved to fight! 

[b]3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: Sharr swiveled round, spying the dwarf who had shouted him over. He jogged over to him, "You said something about ale?" Sharr asked excitedly.

"Aye, I did young man, grab ye'rself one lad!"

Sharr eyed him suspiciously for a moment, but the suspicion soon dissipated, he could never turn down an ale, and besides the barman had already poured him the beer out.

"How much will this set me back then?" Sharr asked quizically.

"Free for the this one, but half a minas for the rest"

"Very reasonable indeed" was Sharr's reply. "How much will I get if I gave you this?" He produced a gleaming aqua blue diamond. The bartender's eye gleamed and replied "Tonight, and probably all of tomorrow my friend!" That suited Sharr perfectly, looks like he was staying here for a couple of days then!

[Princeton 396]

 

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Although not a bad application, I am going to have to deny this -

 

Firstly, your meta-gaming definition could benefit from an example.

 

Secondly, your biography contains no LOTC lore. In your biography, it is beneficial to add things such as where your character was born and too what clan. I suggest reading the wiki to learn information about such things. Also, if you wish to become a druid, it may be more beneficial to be born a forest dwarf who have a natural inclination to nature.

 

Secondly, your ORQ's seemed to be short and were a bit on the power-gamey side. I suggest expanding upon your biography with more dialogue and detailed actions to better paint the situations more vividly. Try to avoid power-gaming and possibly give your dwarf some downsides to his many positives.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns!

[Princeton 396]

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