[Denied]Marth56S New Application

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: marth56
How old are you?: 12 nearly 13
Time-Zone: GB
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played on one light RP server and one Heavy RP server.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: People have told me about it.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/90168-marth56s-application/
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): 
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yep

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: To fulfill a role as a character, whether made up or real.
Meta-gaming: Player 1 finds out info about Player 2 Out-Of-Character and then uses this info when RPing
Power-emoting: Forcing an action onto another player e.g. Player 1 Kills Player 2. But Player 2 doesn't want to be killed

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Adra Huntingdon
Current Age: 24
Sub-race (if any):  High Elf

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Adra was born and raised in Malinor. He grew up very happily there. Until one day. His father loved to go on hunting trips, however, one day he didn't come back. He was missing for three days. On the fourth day a group of Malinor Sentinels found him. Laying face down on the grass with an arrow in his back. Adra was so upset by this news he took a bow and a quiver of arrows and fled Malinor, into the forests beyond. He was there for two weeks.

 

He spent his time hunting and cooking animals for food. On the second week Adra came across a group of the undead. He followed them quietly. They were so engrossed in staying out of sight themselves they didn't notice Adra, or the sentinels behind them. Adra, however, did notice the Sentinels. They signaled for him to move out of the way and he did. They then charged at the undead, the sound of steel on steel echoed throughout the forest. In the end the Sentinels defeated the Undead. They then found Adra beside the corpses.

"What's your name, boy" Said a Sentinel.

"Adra, sir" Replied Adra

"You better come with us, the forests are no place for a child." Said a second Sentinel. Adra nodded and followed them back to Malinor. His mother was furious with Adra for running away, but happy that she had her son back. From that day on, Adra only hunted for fun. He didn't camp out in the woods any more. However some day he would like to go back and relive that memory.

 

Ambitions for the Future: To become a full time hunter.
Personality: Feisty, head strong. Can easily get into trouble with his short temper.
Skills: Is great with a bow and arrow. Can be very stealthy when hunting.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Blonde hair, green clothes for camoflage.  Note: I can't get the screenshot without it destroying the app is it possible I could PM it to someone???
Any other details you wish to share about your character: No, not really.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: Adra walks up to the group.

"What'ya doing." Said Adra

"This kid is annoyin' us." Said one of the bullies.

"Doesn't give you the right to pick on him, does it?" 

"I think you'll find it does." 

"Look just leave him alone."

"Um no."

Adra takes out a coin pouch,tosses each of the bullies a coin and then puts the coin pouch away again.

"Now be off with ya'!" Said Adra.

Adra kneels down beside the child. "Who were they?" 

My brothers friends," said the child sighing and looking downwards.

"Hm, who's your mother,boy, and exactly what happened," Said Adra

The boy told Adra everything as well as who his mother was and where he could find her. He then went to the childs mother and told her about what happened. The child boy didn't get bullied from then on. (Note: I just assumed it was a boy, not trying to be sexist or anything)

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: Adra pulled the man up and gave him back his walking stick.

"Oh thank you young man," Said the old man in a frail voice.

"No problem," Adra said picking up the gold coins and putting them back into the pouch. Adra handed the man his bag of coins back. 

"Oh how can I ever repay you," said the man taking the bag of coins, " oh I know." He takes out five coins from the bag and hands them to Adra. "Here you go," 

"oh it's no trouble, really."

"Don't be stupid, I can't walk without my stick, I would have died otherwise."

Adra takes the coins and walks away thanking the man as he did so.

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).
Note: If prices I state are reasonable please say, because I haven't been on the server I don't know how things should be priced.
Answer: "Hm, do you have a bow, Adra asked.

"Yes, yes! plenty of bows, great quality, made with the finest string and hand cut wood"

"Really" Adra looks impressed.

"How much do you sell them for?"

"10 gold"

" 10 gold! That's a rip off."

"Really? Well for quality string and hand cut wood I would say that's perfectly reasnoble."

"Well I don't, 5 gold?"

"um no."

" I know I will meet you half way, 8 gold"

"Fine"

Adra hands over the coins and the man goes and gets the bow. He then brings it out and hands it to Adra. "Thank you,"

"Thanks" 

Adra walks away back to his house. The next day he used the bow when he went hunting. It broke after one arrow.

"Damn shopkeeper!"

Adra went back to the clearing but the shopkeeper had gone. A sign was left in the carriages place. 

"Don't try to haggle bad prices with me son, that's how you get scammed!"

[Lita 677]

1. Expand upon your definitions, they need to be a bit more elaborate.
2. Place the tag [Elf] in your topic title, as requested.
3. Your character is much too young to have run into undead. The undead have not been about since Aegis, which would be approximately two-hundred years ago in-character.
4. To place in a screenshots, go to a free image-sharing website such as Imgur and upload it, then past a link here.
5. Your ORQs should be written more like stories than a series of text. Please refer to previous applications if you don't understand this.

Remember to wait 24 hours after this verdict before reapplying, and feel free to PM me if you have any questions or concerns.

Edited June 16, 2013 by {Mentor} Escharian
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