LordCommander

Well done! Your app has been accepted! You shall be added to the whitelist shortly, might I recommend joining the new player Discord to speak with our friendly AT and Helpers to get you started in your adventures in Axios. https://discordapp.com/invite/C2ETUy9

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

Well done! Your app has been accepted! You shall be added to the whitelist shortly, might I recommend joining the new player Discord to speak with our friendly AT and Helpers to get you started in your adventures in Axios. https://discordapp.com/invite/C2ETUy9

This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum.

Sadly, your application was denied. You were missing one more lore reference, and your skin is sadly still not lore-friendly. There is a lot of really bad dress skins I know, but try your best to look for a skin that is more fitting of your character, I'm sure under the hundreds of thousands of frilly girl dresses, there is some cool roguish attire waiting to be worn. I do hope you try again later. You may apply again in 12 hours

Hello Friend!, sadly your app was not up to the quality required to be accepted, however, if you fix a few things, this pending will be changed to Accepted. 1) Your Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming are sadly incorrect. However you can find the correct definition on the Wiki, Please use your own words for plagiarizing will get your app instantly denied. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying 2) Sadly your backstory does not meet the two-paragraph minimum requirement. I recommend going into more detail into why they rebelled, why were their parents snobby and rich? were they Nobility? Merchants? Also, you need 2 more references to the lore so I recommend looking in the Wiki for more details on Courland. 3) Your strengths and weaknesses need clarification, why is one of their weaknesses water? perhaps explain why you have those strengths and weaknesses, like maybe they almost drowned and it gave them a fear of water or perhaps their love of archery and art were their way of expressing themselves in a restrictive life that they so desperately needed. 4) The last thing that needs to be fixed is your skin, it is not appropriate to the setting. I recommend looking on Planet Minecraft for a Proper Medieval Fantasy Skin, and writing a proper description to match the skin, like 2+ Sentences to describe them. Once you have done all the things, you will very likely be accepted!. Don't give up hope though, I believe in you!.

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

You have fixed the problems of your application. Welcome aboard, I will be adding you to the whitelist shortly. I Recommend joining the New Player Discord should you need any help. https://discord.gg/C2ETUy9

Hello There!, Your application was almost accepted however there are a few things you need to fix. 1) You need to include 3 references to the Lore, although you did include Highlander, I recommend looking into the lore for a location to be from. If you need any help finding a place, msg me on the forums 2) In the screenshot of your skin, the eyes do not match the description, it isn't a big thing, and if you need someone to fix it, I'm willing to help. You have 24 hours to fix your mistakes, you can do it!.

Honestly, these coup rules are pretty good. I agree with @Greekbro33's concerns, a few things such as that added to the rules, and these new coup rules will greatly add and support political RP instead of limit it.

Minecraft IGN: LordCommander/JordanXlordForum Username: LordCommanderSkype Username: JordanXlord Link to examples of past work:

Name: Dargrim Irongrinder (Username): JordanXlord Put an X next to your chosen candidate Grilthram Grandaxe Oyvind Goldhand Gror Ireheart X

Race: Ascended (Highlander) Body Type: Tall, Bulky, and muscular Extras (Earings, items , Pose): Is wearing his heavy platemail, with blue cloth under it, imagine like a surcoat under armor. Has around his neck a golden Lorraine Cross At his belt a heavy Aurum Warhammer. As for his pose, imagine the stereotypical superhero pose. Basically a giant super positive Germanic Paladin-like person Basically Reinhardt from Overwatch, but without the scars, young, and with glowing eyes. Skin Picture (I don't want to save your skin): Your compliment! ( Include @ So they know you talkin' crap) : I have three to give because I can. @Skylez1 I met you when I was first becoming a Ascended, although you are a spook, I enjoyed talking to you through private messages, you are a pretty swell dude. @NJBB My Favorite Dread Knight and my Arch-Nemesis. One day we will meet again on the battlefield and I shall destroy you <3 @Racker / Lefty My King, My Great Glorious Dwarven King, it was an honor to serve under you as Thond Doomforged

Honestly, I like some of the ideas of this lore, I think you should go into more mechanical detail on the Buff effect. The casting chart is pretty clear and the ball spell is pretty interesting as a magic projectile to counter other magic projectiles.

Good Villains improve RP Bad Villains only ruin it. Option 3 seems the most effective.

Never before, have I ever cheered for Schnub'nub. He is the true King of Courland for sure.

Volkhard looks upon all of the written responses, a deep anger fills his thoughts taking an hour of prayer before responding with a letter sealed with a wax seal of a silver flame with the Lorraine Cross engraved in it. The handwriting is simple and lacks much flourish. To the Teutonic Order "I write this letter in heavy heart, for I had the utmost respect for the Teutonic Order. The order that holds the ideals of the Haenseti to heart, founded by a member of such a glorious people. They were my childhood heroes and I hope for a day in which they can return to the prestige of yore. However, their cowardly assault upon our fort had steeled my heart. These were not the heroes in the stories of Haensetic Youth. These were cowards who fled when their backhanded tactics failed them. I was hoping for the great order to fight us with honor, sword against sword. However, instead, they struck at us from a distance, using their grappling hooks to move across the keep, firing at us from a distance like cowards. This is unacceptable behavior, next time you attempt to give us a show of force, do not act as Courlanders with their tails between their legs. I promise you that I shall meet you upon the battlefield with vigor and purpose, as a true son of Haense. Many of our critics speak in the shadows like the snakes they are, their words laced with poison as they lack the courage to speak directly to our faces. Much of them are believing the half-truths and carefully trod lies written by traitors who had committed sins against the order and hoped to bring us down with them. I shall speak with GOD as my witness, I am not a lapdog of the Ascended Order. The Ascended Order has its flaws, as often many of our ranks, me included have gone against the wishes of the Master Sage and traveled without protection. This has caused our less stalwart members to fall against a more powerful enemy. With our blood, being taken by the unholy creatures of the world to create their godless elixirs. I will not state names, for you know who you are. Also, our progress as a league of holy orders has been lacking at best, The Ascended have been stretched thin by their constant involvement, with the politics between the other orders having made them at times questionable allies. Due to our mistakes, we have allowed undead threats to be left rampant and little progress made in the recapturing of Bastion from Mordring and his forces. The League is not alone to blame for this, however, with the interference of the Teutonic Order and our focus on trying to cure a woman of her godless curse. We are sworn by our duty to defend the descendants and try to redeem the souls of those who are willing to repent. Those who call the ward in our care a undead, and make it the reason to focus on us instead of the true enemy of the mortal races. They are at best a misguided fool, and at worst a likely agent of Mordring himself, wanting to plunge the world into chaos to make us less of a threat to their undead masters. The only Ward we have in our care, being not a undead monstrosity, but a victim of a dark curse. I was raised in the Church of the Canon, which one of its tenets is the Mercy of the Creator We hope to act as an agent of such a mercy upon those who wish to repent, we are trying to give a descendant woman who was forced against her will to take up a dark coven with dark forces, a chance to help the world in stopping them. Thanks to the assaults upon us, and the condemnation upon such a creature. Our progress upon stopping such a Coven has been put to a Halt. Those who have done this, you are now responsible for the blood on their hands, and I pray that GOD shows mercy upon you. Those who do not repent, such as the servants of Mordring, we offer no mercy but the purifying fires of Aeriel and the sword. Many of us have risked our lives in the defense of Bastion, I was there providing support and fighting on the front lines. So make no mistake, The Ascended Order is no servant of darkness. I hope for a day that the Ascended Order can be free of such claims and that we can continue to aid and help the Descendant races in their war against the Darkness. But until such claims are dismissed and the black hearts of Cowardice is removed from the hearts of such proud orders such as the Teutonic Order. We are forever going to repeat the cycle of a neverending war against the unliving." -Signed Volkhard Markwardt, Former Soldier of the Royal Haensetic Army Ascended of the Blue Sect

I kinda want one now...

Thond Doomforged stares from the afterlife, his vengeful glowing eyes burning with scorn. "Finalleh Dormin s'ows 'is face, time for 'is metal to be tested. Will 'e be s'attered before deh forge of adversity, or will 'e be stronger w'ere I 'ad failed." He growls down as he pacing across the Auction of the Dead.

10/10 High Quality Meme.