hypercrit

Moved to Accepted Forum

*shivers* Another baby. I think I heard that you would be Grim's brother IG, and I believe you are both pretty good RPers, from what I've heard and experienced. Thus, I will accept your 'infant' character.

(( I have one thing to say. FUS RO DAH! Might do an informational video on how to apply once I fix up my mic. ))

Moved to Denied Forum

Well, Aislin, your app was pretty good, but it had one outlying issue. Your character seemed to be villainous. First of all, there was cannibalism. Featured here: And vandalism, featured here: These acts are only allowed via use of a Villain Application. And unless you have one present, you will not be allowed to enter the world of Asulon on your alternate account if your character will do these villainous things.

Moved to Denied Forum

6.576/10 I've seen you round, know your an FM, but don't really know you.

Moved to Denied Forum

Why did I deny you? Your definition of powergaming was incorrect... Your powergaming definition was incorrect. This is a roleplaying server, where you make your own path, not an RPG where you select skills, grind mobs, etc. This is a server that we use our imaginations on! The form of powergaming you mentioned was the type only seen in RPGs. Our type of powergaming is more focused on player to player reactions and how these reactions play out. I will not give you any further information, you will have to find that out yourself. Your definition of metagaming was incorrect... Your metagaming definition did not properly show and outline what you need to know. Use examples, make sure that we are aware of your exact knowledge of the term, and how to avoid using it. Without that, we cannot accept this definition, because this shows that you may unknowingly use it ingame as you are not certain of the uses and meaning of the term. Your ORQs were much too short... Short answers in the ORQ section are not adequate. We need to know what your character sees, thinks, smells, feels and hears in that situation, to an extent that we are there, and we know exactly how your character would react if it were allowed into the world of Asulon. Your ORQs were in the future tense... You answered your ORQs in the future tense. Your character is there right now, in that situation, and he is acting right now. There is no 'I would' there is 'Bob IS'. For he is there, and he is in that circumstance. You need to roleplay as you would on the server, as your character would. He is there, what is he doing? Is he running? Is he fighting? He does not get to plan ahead, there is no ‘would’ there is ‘is’ and ‘are’. Present, not future. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8 Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

Moved to Denied Forum

Why did I deny you? Your ORQs were short... Short answers in the ORQ section are not adequate. We need to know what your character sees, thinks, smells, feels and hears in that situation, to an extent that we are there, and we know exactly how your character would react if it were allowed into the world of Asulon. Your English was not great. Your english in this application was not the greatest. It included spelling and grammar errors. An easy way to fix this up is to first write up your application in a Word Document, then use the spellchecking feature. It should make your app much more legible. Your formatting made my eye's bleed You need to make this easier to read though. Use colours, use spaces to separate paragraphs. Fix up your formatting. There are many guides around the forums that portay how to do this in an excellent manner, showing how to use colours correctly, using spcaes and italics to overall give better legibility of the application. You need to use the new application format. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8 Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.