MonkeyCoffee

Awesome! I just hope that the events that happen won't all be American based, as I won't ever be able to attend them ;-;

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the following reasons: First of all, you cannot have "Sir" as a title from the beginning. You need to earn that in RP. Also, your surname "Werping" isn't really a Human surname to be honest. Please fix this! Secondly, you describe lots of things in what your character's ambitions are, but I haven't found anything as to how he learned that. Where did he learn strategy? Or using a bow and sword? Who are his brothers? Please include that in your biography! Also, please include more lore in your biography, you can find some on the wiki! Here is a link to it so you can start quicker. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?/external/wiki (Please mind, the wiki layout is temporary, so don't mind the background, please) Your sub-race is Southeron, however, your skin does not look like a Southeron. Southerons have black skin colors, whilst your skin has white coloring. Please fix this issue! I want you to include dialogue in your first Open Reponse Question. I also found this one to be very weird. Why, if he comes to work for you, will he become richer? I thought that you were very poor and barely had any money. Plus, you need to have a VA for 4B, Political Corruption. You cannot simply kill two bandits on your own. That is power-gaming. You didn't even describe it fully, you simply said "I attack them". Also, some random person that you save is not simply a wizard that has a magical scroll that can summon any amount of any resources. I also think that you don't really understand Roleplay, since you said "He is extremely grateful to me, and I make him one of my followers. He becomes on of my right hand men and helps me build my kingdom.


". This is not an RPG server like Skyrim where you can get followers. In your last Open Response Question, you say "The man begins to argue" and "I confront". You could easily make dialogue out of this, as that is how it will go in roleplay too. Plus, you need to have evil 4A for this, which is Deception. Honestly, I think that you believe that roleplaying is the same as an RPG game, which it is not. Anyways, please don't get discouraged by this! I also don't want to come over as mean, as that is totally not my idea. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post's edit seen below or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

I really, really like this idea! Just like with Benbobean, I didn't even think of this being like vampirism! Just a simply question, and I don't know if it is answered in the OP since I skimmed through this, but would someone of older age die rather than still being infected? Because since they're weaker and probaply need more blood, they would die since the paraiste needs blood too.

(Yay, I can't be there since it'll be 2 AM. ;-;)

You are a goddess.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application has been... Very nice application! I found it very unique to make a "bad luck" character! Welcome to Anthos! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application, I have decided to deny it for the following reasons. But please, don't be discouraged by it, you can try again! First off, you removed the question "Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?" question. I do not know why you did this, but do not alter the format in any way. Secondly, I want you to add examples to your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions. We want to see that you fully understand them! Thirdly, someone can not come from Aegis and be twenty-one years old. Aegis is about 100 or so years since we left. Physically, a Human would've died of old age by now. I really, really liked your biography. It was so creatively written! However, you did not include a sufficient amount of lore, which is needed to be accepted. Here is a link to the wiki to help you out! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?/external/wiki (Please forgive the rather stupid layout. It is only temporary). All of your Open Response Questions need far more detail. Add some more actions, dialogue, etc. to them. We want to see your roleplaying abilities! I know, this may seem like a lot, but I know you can do it! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post's edit (seen below) or face instant denial. If you have any more questions, feel free to PM me!

Makayla strolls down into the Druid Grove, excited due to completing her first task. She was looking for her Guide, Seed Druid Kefi, but she cannot find her. She looks everywhere, until eventually hearing music coming from somewhere. Looking around, she finds the volume of the sound getting louder and louder before entering the farming area, noticing Kairi siting on the root of the tree. She smiles before walking up to her and sitting down, cross-legged whilst listening to the music.