[Denied]Wisemagicalhags' Application

[Wisemagicalhags 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Wisemagicalhags

How old are you?: -  13

What time-zone do you live in?: - EST

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - A group of friends and I played as self-created characters based off of a book series called, 'Warriors'

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes, I've been on Age of Adventure

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Nope, I'm brand new.

How did you hear about us?: - I play dungeon realms, which Availer made. After I heard that Availer also worked on this server, I decided to apply.

What do you think the server will be like? -  I think it'll be fun and adventurous

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes, I agree with them.

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - 

• You can't use any client-side modifications that give you an advantage over other players, like; speed-hacking, x-ray vision, fly-hacking. You can however, use things such as More Player Models and Rei's Mini-Map which we encourage you use!

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Playing the role of a character.

What’s metagaming?: - Using knowledge in game that your character doesn't have.

What’s powergaming?: - Doing something that your character doesn't have the ability or power to do.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Khordaldrum

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Dwarf, Cave Dwarf

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 36

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Most of Khordaldrum's family died when he was a young boy. At the age of 7, the Undead raided his family's mine. Khordaldrum, his sister, and Khordaldrum's father all survived. But a week or 2 after the attack, Khordaldrum's sister's mind became under control of Iblees and his minions. After his sister's death, Khordaldrum stayed with his father until age 13. But then his father died to a cave-in.

What are they like (personality)?: - Khordaldrum is usually a cool headed, witty person.

What are their ambitions?: - To become the most rich dwarf and hoard tons of loot and gems.

Do they have any special skills?: - Khordaldrum is an exceedingly good fighter.

What are their weaknesses?: - Khordaldrum is terrible at ranged combat.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Khordaldrum has a long, braided beard which flows in front of him. He also likes to fight, and battle over his jewels and gems.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - Khordaldrum likes gems and jewels.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://puu.sh/5iC2h.jpg

[ski_king3 0]

 

This is a really great start for an application, but unfortunately, I believe you need a bit more work before you're ready to RP on the server.

 

For one, your powergaming definition isn't quite correct. If you're having trouble finding the proper definition, there's no better source than this one. It's an article on our wiki which defines powergaming perfectly.

 

Also, your biography could use some work. For one, your character would not have experienced the Undead, as they have not existed since Aegis. That was about 100 years ago, we have traveled from Aegis to Asulon to Anthos, which is the place we now reside.

 

Also, your biography could use a bit of expansion, both in length and the amount of lore. If you're having issue with finding some lore, I'd advise looking at our wiki.

 

For you next application, please post your application on our Minecraft Forum Post. All you need to do is log in and copy/paste your application.

 

To be fair, though, I really liked your character's ambitions. Like seriously, that is stereotypical dwarf, something we do not see often.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

[ski_king3 0]

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