[Denied] [Pending] Joeydog24 2Nd Application

[Teaghue Flamesculptor 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Joeydog24

How old are you?: 15 almost 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I’m aware 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): I have this is my second one https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/128478-joeydog24-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I agree to the rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: For No metagaming I agree with this because I want to make this server as real as possible for the role playing experience

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I understand the rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was on YouTube looking for the best RP server I came across this one and I fell in love.

 

Definitions

 

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a person or Character in a cretin time period and making the time period come to life For Example Taking the role of a different persona and basing your decisions and actions upon the persona’s personality and traits.

What is metagaming?: Using an advantage that was not in the game world to outdo players and using “Out Of Character” For Example using skype to ask for help when your friend’s character is across the map.  

What is powergaming?: Taking shortcuts without any real RP or any real game play to achieve the highest outcome and being able to become god like or forcing action upon them for example Using emotes *kills the orc that stand before me*.   

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Teaghue Flamesculptor 

Character’s gender: male 

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 22

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

                        When I was a boy back in Athera I lived in the city Kal'Agnar. War with Dwarfs and the Orcs made my family move to avoid bloodshed. We were traveling out of the city when orcs attack us and my father told me to run. As I as was running my father shouted to avenge him, I stop but didn't look back and kept running.I ran a for awhile more turn around and saw my mom running in the opposite direction as me I shouted out to her but she didn't hear me. i was going to run toward her but there were to many orcs. A few days later I saw a small house. Then a large man came out and pick me up took me inside and feed me. After I was done eating I walked to the bed and I slept for a full day. Once I woke up the old man thought me how wield a sword and an ax. This went on for several years he barely spoke but one day on his bed, he sent someone to call me in to tell. I ran in there and saw he did not have long to live a few days at best. I spoke to him and asked him if there was anything I could do. And the only thing he said was "Find Peaceful Solutions for your problems and only use your sword wisely... and never take revenge on anyone." He died a few days later.

 

                     After his death I took my belonging and headed for the road with him in his coffin. I rode to the cemetery and barred him there was no one there beside me. after I barred him I wanted to look for my mom so I headed for the road. I headed on my journey after he was in the ground. On the road I never would my sword nor axe for any problem. I traveled far and wide. Just exploring something, I always wanted to do. And one day I ran across Orcs remembering what my father said. I glanced at my sword and ax. I remember what the old man said. There I made a Choice to listen to what my farther said or to leave in peace. After sitting there for around ten minutes I decide to leave to keep what the old man said.  When seeing the road, I decide to travel along it only to find the Orcs destroyed the small villages. Then one of the Orc Shouted “There is one alive there" pointing at me. I begin though ride off as fast as I could but my horse could not bare it, we both fell right there but I kept running. In this moment I felt a certain form of Deja vu then I stopped and turn toward them. By now it was me against 2. I killed 1 of them and injuring another but the other one ran off. I did not know why till I turned around and saw humans behind me. The humans from the village that was destroyed I thought. They asked me to join them in the fight against the Orcs in which I said No to for “I had another purpose in life to find peace and to find my mother.” They said Farwell and rode off. 

 

Personality Traits: Sad, Depressed, clever, Disciplined, and curious 

 Ambitions: I would like to find peace in the world and remember what the old man taught me. Also making a living farming.

Strengths/Talents: I'm Strong, clever, good with melees, and mining.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: But I am greedy and not good with ranged weapons I am also very slow on foot and most horses are too large for me to ride.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 5 foot Weight: 300lb Long beard, and chubby. 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/jU7WvsW

[Overland 349]

Your appliation has been put on pending, please make the requested changes within 24 hours to be accepted and private message me once you have done so.

• Just a few concerns with your biography.
  • It's overused that your character's parents where killed, then your character himself was taught how to fight by a 'man in the forest.'
  • How could have your character managed to have taken on four Orcs and routed them?

Insufficient changes were made, please reapply after 24 hours.

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