Minime126's apllicatoin, greatly improved

[Lugmak 20]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Minime126

-How old are you?:

11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GTM, Engaland

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, but being human we all make mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm a very nice, kind person, and when i get back from school i like to unwind and play a good rpg.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

about six hours a day, apart from when i'm at my mums, we dont have a computer there.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

about 2 years

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

I know that when you start playing, you need to look at the world though your characters eyes, and start thinking how they would think, not how you would think.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think this server will be great, and alot of fun to play on.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

well i have played on quite a few, my main one i played on (Fascoona, i think thats how you spell it) was shut down and the other ones i played on i left because i saw this one.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

yes i have read all the rules and do agree to all of them, without them there would be chaos and the undead would just vanquish the world very easily, and i do like the lore, the way every player creates and develops the worlds storyline.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Humans,Elves,Dwarfs and Orcs

-How did you hear about us?:

me and my mate (nipperpipper) where just looking at severs then he said "OMG this sever looks epic!" and it was this one.

-Did you vote?:

Yes, because i think this server is the best in the world!

-What was your favourite Law?:

That we must all play in character and we can not play out of it, so its like a real rpg, and no body is scripted to do anything.

-What was your least favourite Law?:

i dont have any, i think they are all right and they should be kept how they are so everyone can have a good time

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

Minime126

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Urak-bor

-What is your Race?:

Orc

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Minime126

-Biography:

When Urak-bor was born He was a huge baby, so big whilst comeing out of his mothers womb she nearly died, but that is the case with most Orcs. Urak-bor was born in the city of Krugmar, and grew up being educated in the ways of reading, writing and building. His family was poor, and could no longer pay for Urak-bor's education, so at the age of 16 they sent him down the mines to start working for the family. After two years of working down the mines, he finally was free to do as he wished. He started to train with the sword, and after two years of training he started to realize that being a warrior was what he wanted, to vanquish the undead and protect the Orcish kingdom.

-Character Age:

19

-Character Appearance:

Tattoo on back and arms, massive teeth, strange hair, scars all over his body (from mining and training with the sword).

-Character Personality:

Loyal, Protective, Obaying

-Your ambitions:

Protect the kingdom of the Orcs and vanquish the undead

-Can your character read or write?:

some words he can write and read, as his education did stop

-Can your character mine?:

Yes, he spent two years mining

-Are you a capable builder?

when he was at school he dabbled in the art

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes, he wishes to become a great warrior

-Enjoy Farming?:

No not really, he has never been near a farm

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

He doesn't have any special skills but he can do most things just not very well (apart from sword fighting).

-A screenshot of your skin:

My Skin edit previewer is broken so i had to do my skin by guesting where the bits went and i cant take a screen shot because its broken!

-Other Information:

You guys are awesome, keep up the good work!

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need a comprehensive and in0depth character biography. This is going to be the basis of your character. There can be no gaps. Make it interesting and fun, but not generic or completely out of it. Then also improve your character ambitions and personality as this is what you need to follow when playing in-game.