[Denied][Pending]Monkeybutt50 (Curtis Lemora)

[CharlieAda123 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: MonkeyButt50 (I made it when I was 7)

How old are you?:11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No royal background

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope, pretty straight forward

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend (Arys, aka Skyoats) showed this to me.

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?:Pretending to be someone you are not

What is metagaming?: Using knowledge you have to manipulate a situation in a video game.

What is powergaming?: Overpowering something, someone, or some situation in a video game

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Curtis Lemora

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Kha'Cheetrah

Character’s age: 27

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

   Curtis was born in a small house in the Karakutuan Empire.  When his parents died of unknown diseses when he was three,  he was forced in an orphinage. The orphanige is where he  met a human by the name of Isah. Isah and Curtis were best friends all growing up.  Until Isah was adopted.  Curtis never saw Isah again, but meeting Isah gave him the love to have friends, specifficaly humans.

   Curtis eventually escaped from the orphanage when he was 16.  He then started to take up odd jobs.  Mostly assasinations and spy work, do to his ability to be very stealth, light, and quick.  Eventually he decided to hang loose for a while.  He met Isah again and they eventually became roommates.  Curtis had a lot of people trying to kill him, but Isah didn't know that.  A day came when Curtis regretted all of the assasin work he did.  Isah was murdered.  Curtis gathered so much hate he wanted to kill all Orcs he ever saw after him realizing that his Best friend Isah Connor Newblik had been murdered by Orcs.

  Nine years pasted and Curtis completely forgot about Isah and he did not do any assination work in those years.  Neither did he kill any Orcs (Exept for one that killed Isah).  He aventually overcame his have of Orcs completely. So then he set of  on his journey to start a new life.

Personality Traits: Fenicky, smart, presice, well rounded, Haunted with horrible dreams.

Ambitions: Curtis wants to start a life with out all his baggage.  He also wants to settle in to a nice village and make a fair ammount of friends.

Strengths/Talents: Stealth, fast

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Being reminded of Isah's death, fighting Orcs, Being well known among the public. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):5' 2", 89 lbs.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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[OhDeerLord 673]

Pending

 

Can you expand on your Roleplaying definition?

Also- Your metagaming and power gaming definitions need to be extended swell to make sure we know you understand the rules relating to them.

Perhaps giving examples will help with this.

 

This might just be a minor thing but Curtis is a rather human name for a Kha. Maybe poke around to other Kha rpers or look at current Kha and see what their names are for an idea of how their names are typically formed?

The Karakatuan Empire is no longer around, that was in Asulon, read over the Kha wiki page for the name of the new settlement in Athera.

Why was he in a orphanage with humans? Why was he not adopted by another Kha family?

What was this unknown disease? There are plenty of known diseases on the server, and even a plague. Look around on the wiki for the information about the plague, if my memory is correct it would be around the time your character was young.

I don't really like the 'kill all orcs' but at least that isn't your ambition.

 

I'd like you to put more thought into his strengths and weaknesses. For strengths at least- strength isn't always combat prowess.

I do like your weaknesses, except I'm not sure what you mean by 'fighting orcs'. Do you mean that he has difficulty fighting against them?

Also what do you mean by 'well known by the public'?

 

Try to think about these things.

Please contact me within 24 hours, either with some questions or telling me you've made changes to your application.

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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