[Denied]Applecation Orc Goblin Scarg

[War33 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

Im from sweden im tryigng my best when it come to the english

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: mrr20

How old are you?: 34

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: all of them. If I have to chose it's the global rules.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I googled for the name

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: when you take a roll character and speak with other. You use the lore and the character you are to build a story to tell.

What is metagaming?: when some one tell you something Orc and you us it as rp.

What is powergaming?: when you take the right from someone to do there's rp and force them to your decision unwillingly. When you know it would be different if they choose to rp.

 

In-Character Information 

 

Character’s name: Scarg

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Orc Goblin

Character’s age: 30

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Scarg is a male Orc Goblin from Dom Clan. As young he show to be cunning and intellectual can take you longer then brutal force. The elder saw that and made a use of it. Daily training in thinker, mining and combat Scarg achieve fast to be ready to follow Om the hunt. The hunt was everything for him. He took liking in kill undead. As a smaller Orc he made the best to show where his strength is and wast left alone. When he was bullied he did show for the must dumb Orc how a catapult work. Shame on all the meat. War and battles become fast a living. The hunt took Scarg far from home to places he never saw. Aegis are big and do clams her battles. In the hunt he achieved knowledge to advance his skills. Scarg promising behaviour took him to join the most dangerous hunt. One of this hunt took Scarg to raid an undead stronghold. The loses was grate but the spoil matched the cost. When this now small company decide to return home an unexpected event took place. For a time undead hunted them. One by one thy kills the Orc one at each attack. In the end Scarg and his friend Mog was the only one left. They decided to split up. Scarg did seek the protection of the mountains and cave. It took him to un expected journeys. For a long time he wondered alone. His greed denied him to trow away his spoils. Even if he figure out the undead wanted it. Loneliness become a sickness. Murdering stealing become a living. He was lost for the first time in his life. His closest friend was the awareness of the undead. Always whispering. One of days he reached a shrine. At night he left the spoils at the shrine to an elder. Scarg wanted to be free from this curse and return to his hide place in the mountain. At the morning he could see pilar of smoke from the shrine and the village at the foot of the mountain. He know he could not return home now. The undead have took what they wanted. The shame and fare is to big. Scarg decided to continue his journy and form his own band to hunt the undead and eliminate all of them.

 

Personality Traits: intellectual and cunning. Have red brow eyes and bald. His skin is brow yellow,

 

Ambitions: eliminate all the undead.

Strengths/Talents: intellectual/cunning. Talent warfare mining thinkers. Unique lore of undead.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: fare for loneliness and undead magic. He believe his cursed. 

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

6 feet tall 250 lbs

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): I did try the guide you told me about. I didnt work for me i dont know if it is the antivirus or something else. Im glad to mail you a picture if you like or link to the skin i will us, http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/the-hobbit-goblin-skin/

[Friendly Guy 223]

I understand English is not your first language, so their is some leniency here but it does make it very hard to follow your characters story,

1. Your definitions are close, Im not sure if its the language barrier but please try and rephrase

2. Your story, I simply dont understand the timeline. You have aegis but that was 3 ((Real life)) years ago please try with some more modern lore

3. More ambitions what happens when the undead are gone

4. More weakness's Can your  character swim? Scared of heights?

[Friendly Guy 223]

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