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[Elhaelthewise 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Antwone64

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No combat logging

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Searching roleplaying and racial servers

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting or assuming a role or character

What is metagaming?: Using outside information while role-playing

What is powergaming?: Making the character you are role-playing as too powerful

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Aiwendil

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 87

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

    My parents call me into the main chamber. I walk in slowly with my backstraight and my blank face showing no emotion just as they have taught me. I know why I'm there. They're going to explain to me about the Order. I'm entering adulthood and I'm becoming ready to train just as my father, his father, and his fathers father had. The Order is an organization of Druids. I doubt I can become one, but I know I need to try my hardest because that is the only reason I was born for. 

    I sit in a carven wooden room that smelt of burned sage. I close my eyes and listen to the vibrations of the other initiates in the structure. All of the sudden everyone stopped and I heard a whisper like the wind say, " Begin". I open my eyes and find a table in front of me that wasn't there before. On it are a bowl of water, a flower in a pot, and a paten of flowering seed. To my amazement the flower begins to wither and I know what I need to do. I need to sustain it's life. Simple. I pour water at the base of the stem and the flower begins to wither faster. My heart starts to beat faster and my hands become sweaty. I hastily pick up the flowering seeds and punch a hole in the soil with my finger. Then to my horror a petal drops. Then another. And another. My eyes drift down as the flower dies.

    My life is over. I failed the test. Then a female human walks in the door wearing dark green robes. "Because your family is so well honored the Elders have decided to give you a second chance. You must go into the wilderness and become one with nature. You have no connection with it what-so ever. Follow me." I follow her down a large staircase through an entrance and outside to a bridge. At the end of the bridge is a ominous forest. The woman takes out a large leather book with a tree carved on the cover. "This is a Druidic Tome. It will be all you have. Now go." I walk across the bridge and I take a long sigh. And I enter the forest.

     {81 Years Later}

     A young adventurer walks through a barren and frosted forest. He goes up to two trees intertwined and sees elven symbols carved into it. 'Those damn shamans trying to scare everyone off again." He walks past the trees unaware that it warned of frost witches. All of the sudden the boy hears "HELP ME PLEASE!" . Its the voice of a young girl so he runs towards it. He finds a girl with her dress entwined in a thorn bush. She looks at him, then behind him. Her pupils widen and frost begins to enswirl her body. "LEAVE ME ALONE" she shrieks, but this time the voice of a wicked woman.The boy sees that she isn't looking at him, but behind him. He turns around and sees a figure leaning against a tree wrapped in a black cloak. The everything went dark.

    The boy wakes up in a bed made of grass. He sits up and finds he is in an earthy hut. There is an old man in brown robes meditating on the ground. "Where am I? Who are you?" he asks panick in his voice. "I am Aiwendil! Who are you!" his voice booms back. The old man sits up and the boy sees he is blind because his eyes are cloudy. "This is the first time in a while I have seen a human." The old man explains that he is what peope call a lost druid, even though he never officialy became one. He stayed in the forest to hide from his fathers wrath. "I know I should, I know!" He says. The boys looks confused at him and asks him who he is talking to. "The forest you fool, they need someone to protect them!" . Aiwendil then decides to go and learn to become a Druid.

Personality Traits: Stubborn, wise, talkative, independent, smart, and anti-social

Ambitions: Become a Druid and protect the forests from evil

Strengths/Talents: Shiftshaping, Natures Communion, and Illusion

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Blind, possibly schizophrenic, stubborn, anti-social

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

Gray, but clouded eyes

Hunched backed

Normal Height= 6"9  Hunchbacked height=6"6

Wears brown robes

Long gray hair

Smells like herbs

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/4616631/druid/

[Readicti 902]

• Expand on your definitions. 
• Your biography lacks server lore and though the story you wrote is good, it doesn't exactly follow how the Order works. There is no trial about saving a flower like that to be taken into the order and they certainly wouldn't kick you out into the wilds for not doing a task well.
• You also cannot know any sort of magic before coming to the server. That means you cannot know shapshifting, natures communion, and illusion. Also, you cannot know druid magic on top of other forms of magic while on the server. 
• If you wish to learn to become a druid or learn another form of magic, you must find a teacher on the server. For druids, you can go to the Grove and seek out someone to help you.
• Your skin doesn't fit how a high elf in his 80's would look. Elves age at a much slower rate then humans and he would actually still be a young adult. You can find examples of skins on our wiki page. 

Overall, spend time reading the rules and wiki page, if you have any questions, feel free to message me.

[Readicti 902]

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