[Denied][Pending] Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:bloxxxerr

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Abusing Glitches

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:I was looking for Lord of the Ring role-playing servers

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:To pretend to be a character

What is metagaming?:Using knowledge of a map as an advantage over other players

What is powergaming?:Taking shortcuts, against the rules of the game

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:Galadhon

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Wood Elf

Character’s age:652

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):He has always loved the trees and nature of the beautiful lands of his people, but he wishes to explore further. His father, a lord of their city, does not share his love for nature and thoroughly disapproves his eagerness to explore the wide lands not controlled by his people. When his father died, at the age of 1285 he was the heir to the throne of his people. He refused to become lord of the elves and was sent into exile as a result. He now wanders the lands, fulfilling his earlier dream, as a ranger but one day hopes to return to his fair homeland to gaze at its beauty once more.

Personality Traits:Merry, joyful and optimistic, even in the face of peril

Ambitions:To one day return to his homeland

Strengths/Talents:Good at Archery and has a great knowledge of trees,plants and nature

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Five feet seven inches and is lean with fair hair and deep blue eyes

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):Sorry, couldn't work out how to do this part

[Elad™ 560]

I'm sorry, but your application has been DENIED. You failed to make the changes requested of you in the 24 hours given.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

• You need to expand on your roleplaying definition. The use of examples is greatly encouraged.
• Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are fairly incorrect. I'd advise you to search up the definitions of each on Google. Be warned however, as plagarism will result in denial.
• You need to include server lore in your biography. This can be anything from towns, cities, places, notable landmarks, notable figures, realms, etc. All this information can be found on our wiki.
• It's impossible for your character to have been offered the position of Lord of the Elves, as no title exists. Furthermore, elven leaders are elected, not selected by their bloodline and whether or not there family were once leaders.
• Denying a position in elven leadership does not result in exile.
• Your ambition is impossible if the city you speak of doesn't exist.
• You need to include weaknesses for your character.
• You need to include a screenshot of the skin you'll be using for your character. Seeing as your having troubles, this guide should help you.

You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please send me a message once you've done this and/or if you have any questions or concerns regarding your application.

[Elad™ 560]

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