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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:linkdarko

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:having to roleplay

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?i just went looking for medieval servers

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:pretending or making a story in games

What is metagaming?:you talk about something irrelevant to rp

What is powergaming?:trying to get something done

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name:boromir

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:human

Character’s age:34

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): boromir is a fierce fighter who thrives for adventure and journey. good with a sword, alright with a bow. born in the north and learned to ride a horse at the age of ten. mastered the sword at seventeen. he then set out to find new places and meet new people

Personality Traits:enthousiastic

Ambitions:travel the entire world

Strengths/Talents: sword, survival

Weaknesses/Inabilities: farming

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):5'7 weight 187 long brown hair beard

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):dont have one yet

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[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your backstory contains little to no lore or any description and does not meet the required two paragraphs. Your backstory just states that your character is good at certain skills and holds nothing of your characters history or life.
• You can not start as a master within one skill
• All your definitions need to be expanded upon
• Your powergaming  and meta-gaming definitons are in-correct
• Try to flesh out your characters ambitions a bit more.
• Your strengths and weaknesses need more fleshing out and are very short
• Please expand upon your characters personality traits 
• You need to apply with a skin linked or uploaded

[James 425]

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