[Denied]Baphus Application

[Baphus 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Baphus

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?A few of my Friends plan to play on the server and after reading the rules and look at the fourms and lore It looks like a lot of fun!

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Intteracting with others as a Character

What is metagaming?:Knowing something you should know based on game mechanics 

What is powergaming?:Claiming an action to work with out the other persons input

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:Adrian Stanhoulth

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):I grew up on a farm on the outskirts of oren with little things to do on the A farm your mind tends to wounder thinking about growing up in big citys and being the hero who saves every one but That was no place for me Some days it would be non stop work on the farm but I get on dreaming of being 'The one'

The general The knight.

 

By the time i was 18 i wanted to enlist in the army my dad refused he said that it was no place for a farmer like me I didnit listen I ran from my old farm and dad To become A hero A Leader A soilder

 

Personality Traits:Not that smart and A day dreamer

Ambitions:To become a Soilder and a hero

Strengths/Talents:Farming skills

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Never fought in his life or Knows yet how to use a weapon

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):5'8 Scar on abdomen mustache

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://gyazo.com/d187c5a15c54d65bd5a10ecc8e6e119b Heres a screen cap!

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• All your definitions need to be expanded upon/extended.
• Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect and your power-gaming definition is partially incorrect/ weirdly worded.
• Your biography needs to be at least 7-10 sentences long and at least two paragraphs.
• Your characters strengths/weaknesses need to be expanded upon.

 

If you have any questions or  concerns feel free to send me a PM!

 

• Note: Make sure when your biography is updated you use current up-to-date lore for oren on the current world of Athera. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

[James 425]

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